Will you be my friend again? (For Andrea)

I unintentionally hurt a good friend of mine and I want her know how deeply sorry I am. Andrea, I am so very sorry.

 

 

 

 

Will you be my friend again?

 

 

Sometimes we don’t see

what the heart tries to tell us,

when clouds form atop of the view

 

Too busy staring

off into the shadows,

missing the visions so true

~

We’re blinded by day

and asleep in the nighttime,

dark is our every day long

 

And I couldn’t see

that my words were so hurtful,

I had no clue I was wrong

~

For I am a man,

nothing more, nothing special,

at least that I see in my eyes

 

So lost in a dream

of my own misdirection,

little did I realize

~

That I had a friend

on this journey I wandered,

walking with me all the way

 

Lending a hand

as I lifted this burden,

I hope it’s not too late to say

~

I am so sorry

for my wayward actions,

I never meant you this pain

 

Will you forgive me,

in spite of my downfalls,

will you be my friend again?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[emmajoy]

In this world, in this life, a friendship is like an extra skin. And, it's only when one or both of you lose that skin, you realise how cold it is, how much it's missed. Jack, this is a very sincere and well.written poem; it proves that you're far too good a friend to lose. And. if you don't mind me embarrassing you a little.. too good a human being. A very public 'sorry' proves my point. So there! :)

Peace and goodwill, friends - before it's too late.

[Jack...]

Emma, you humble me with your kindness. I very much appreciate you my friend.

[Cryingkate]

Excuse me for interrupting , But I couldn't help but over hear that and Emma Joy Bravo to you for saying what i wish I did.........

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An effective and telling apology, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thank you Thomas

[Sami Khalil]

A brave and honest confession that reflects your forgiving heart trying to mend a rift between friends which you cherish and value. A wonderful poem with beautiful imagery and emotions...:)...................

[Jack...]

Thanks Sami. I appreciate you stopping by

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...............

[Jack...]

Jack truly a most honest, and brave poem, to your friend "Andrea".
Nobody is perfect, and we all make mistakes. This is ink from the heart, and well felt,
I think you were truly sorry, by reading this. Wonderful poetry my dear friend... I hope all will turn
out well for the two of you. Best wishes,

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

You're welcome dear Jack.

[Ruth]

Jack, sometimes it happens, we are only human love...be kind to yourself...the key word being "unintentionally" in your note...hope it works out hon x

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Poppy.

[Cassie]

I hope she gets to read this, anyone who gets an apology likes this can not say no, I know she will forgive you.

[Jack...]

Thank you Sunshine. I truly hope so.