Will you be my friend again? (For Andrea)

I unintentionally hurt a good friend of mine and I want her know how deeply sorry I am. Andrea, I am so very sorry.

 

 

 

 

Will you be my friend again?

 

 

Sometimes we don’t see

what the heart tries to tell us,

when clouds form atop of the view

 

Too busy staring

off into the shadows,

missing the visions so true

~

We’re blinded by day

and asleep in the nighttime,

dark is our every day long

 

And I couldn’t see

that my words were so hurtful,

I had no clue I was wrong

~

For I am a man,

nothing more, nothing special,

at least that I see in my eyes

 

So lost in a dream

of my own misdirection,

little did I realize

~

That I had a friend

on this journey I wandered,

walking with me all the way

 

Lending a hand

as I lifted this burden,

I hope it’s not too late to say

~

I am so sorry

for my wayward actions,

I never meant you this pain

 

Will you forgive me,

in spite of my downfalls,

will you be my friend again?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[emmajoy]

In this world, in this life, a friendship is like an extra skin. And, it's only when one or both of you lose that skin, you realise how cold it is, how much it's missed. Jack, this is a very sincere and well.written poem; it proves that you're far too good a friend to lose. And. if you don't mind me embarrassing you a little.. too good a human being. A very public 'sorry' proves my point. So there! :)

Peace and goodwill, friends - before it's too late.

[Jack...]

Emma, you humble me with your kindness. I very much appreciate you my friend.

[Cryingkate]

Excuse me for interrupting , But I couldn't help but over hear that and Emma Joy Bravo to you for saying what i wish I did.........

[Anita Singh]

Very heartfelt. Straight from the heart. Really awesome.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Annabella.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

True friendship is a vital thing that connects two souls into one ray, pointing to one direction. It's also as fragile as it is vital, and having friends to help along the way is a wonderful, unique type of happiness. You have written a sincere and beautiful poem and I'm certain that Andrea will forgive you. Friends are meant to forgive each other's mistakes, and once again, masterfully crafted. Very well done!

[Jack...]

I guess time will tell. Thanks so much my friend.

[Zahra]

things happen between friends but it's lucky have a friend who can step forward for you and accept his or her mistakes. A very beautifully written poem full of sincerity.

[Jack...]

Thank nyou so very much Zahra

[Lydia Shutter]

An honest plea from the heart. Such a bona fide appeal is heartwarming. I hope your friend sees it and realizes you meant her no harm. You have humbled yourself and done all you can. Now the ball is in her court. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Lydi for you sweet words today.

[TL Boehm]

this is beautiful. I hope she accepted your apology....nice to see you here again. Send those RR's to me. I'm behind but I love reading you.

[Jack...]

Unfortunately I dont think so...but you never know. Thanks so much Tammy.

[s y e]

Ah Jack, see no one can stay mad at you especially when you write such lovely poems as an apology. :-)) We need more men like you in our world....

[Jack...]

Don't be too sure about that my friend. I'm sure plenty are mad at me, but thank you for your sweet words.

[s y e]

I bet you none are mad at you... How can they be?

[Laminators Dubai]

wow!
reminded me those days...i used to sing in pubic. :/

[Jack...]

Thanks Glitch. Would love to hear you sing sometime.

[Anand Sehgal]

Too busy staring

off into the shadows,

missing the visions so true---------------------

really honest write ! :)
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[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Some of the hardest feelings are borne out of misunderstandings... But with a true friend, Time works its magic and brings reconciliation. Your feelings are beautifully clear, Jack...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rita. Thank you for being my friend.

[Angi]

Jack, it takes a man to step forward and say those words. Andrea has a huge heart, I know she will see the sincerity here. This place has grown so strange, lately. There are currents flowing through that have stirred up so much muck. It is hard to see things clearly these days. I long for clarity in the WC again. xoxoxo, Jack. Angi~

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Angi. It almost wasn't WC related, just some words that came out of this mouth (slipped past my foot) and I felt very bad and wanted her to know. We are good now.

[Angi]

That is good to know, Jack.