Touching

 

 

 

 

Touching

 

Dreaming past snow drifts

Framing the distance

Starlight reflections

Closer than tomorrow

Touching my skin

 

~

Through soft woolen mittens

Ski jacket hugs, turtleneck wishes

Snow angel dreams and icicle kisses

Slipping my heart inside of your pocket

Where it is warm, safe and secure

~

 

Calling in echoes

Across the white valley

Listen to the wind

Feel the wintry whispers

Touching your skin

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I think my favorite part is the verse in italics. love the little images there.

[Justsimplyjulia]

awww so cute! i loved it! the picture is ADORABLE! Fabulous write jack!
-Dragon

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. Nice to see you again.

[s y e]

Love the change of font in the second stanza, add a lot of effect!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Noodle.

[Anand Sehgal]

I am curious about the change of font in the second stanza ! :)
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[redflutterby]

Youve caught the essence of winter here perfectly. It made me think of making snow angels...youre never to old to do that. Just watch falling back. Don't want to break a hip. ;-pp

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my good friend with the new name. Happy you fluttered by tonight.

[Troy Henson]

A touching piece Jack. Once again you find the emotion in your writing and deliver it so well. I do like the arrangement in this one too. Different layout from you.
Regards
Troy

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Troy for visiting my page and leaving such kind words for me.

[Cryingkate]

Awe, The cutest... Nice touch too with your Layout. Love it..

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

I sit and read with a spirit that had deserted me a couple of years ago...thank you :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

[Jack...]

Words, that touch the core of one soul... nicely expressed here. That's just it... it's felt, and not need to analyze this one. Perfection.

- Elisa

[Jack...]

My sweet friend, your kindness always bring happiness to my world. Thank you so very much.