In Perfect Harmony

 

 

 

 

In perfect harmony

 

 

So still, the air this night does sing,

beyond a truthful stare

A symphony on silent wing,

sweet lyrics on the air

 

Of every word my heart does find

in rhythmic tapestries

These choruses shall make you mine,

so soft upon the breeze

 

O’ wind come take this tender heart

and to the sky now lift

In solitude now weave the dark

in dreams of endless kiss

 

Imagine there are only two,

affectionate thy voice

In melodies of passion new

O’ starry night rejoice

 

I call upon this winter moon,

bright sentry high above

Please sing aloud a wondrous tune

within the key of love

 

So that her ears may come to know

how sweet this world can be

When hand in hand through life we go

in perfect harmony

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

A truly captivating piece, a true achievement.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend

[Latifa]

so lovely Jack
brilliant use of rythme and wording here is simple and beautifully coordinated

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend Latifa for your kindness.

[Sami Khalil]

Always the creative in all which you bring love and harmony to all who are touched . Your words are melodious and thrilling to the senses...Bravo............

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Saki. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................

[icelandicblue]

The key of love sung in perfect harmony beneath a Winter's moon- it sounds lovely Jack, perfectly romantic.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Anne. I truly do appreciate you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting mix of romance and a hint of regret between the lines?

[Jack...]

Thanks so much John. I appreciate you stopping by.

[redflutterby]

Romantic and sweet...nice poem jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my cute friend. Happy you enjoyed this one.

[Traci]

Lovely imagery Jack, "Perfect harmony" from start to finish. Definitely a new favorite.

[Jack...]

Traci, so very nice to see you again. Thank you so much for visiting my page and leaving such kind words for me. You have been missed.

[Traci]

Nice to be back reading your beautiful words, dear friend. I have missed you as well, and hope you and your family have a lovely holiday season.

[Scott Metro]

Very pretty words Jack. You have harvested some romantic thoughts and presented them in a very soothing romantic flow.

Enjoyed this.
Scott

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Scott. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Emerald Seas]

Stringing those lovely words still, aren't you, Jack!? Enjoyed the poem - it's been a while since I've been here reading... this was a good one :)

[Jack...]

My sweet friend, so nice to see you again. Thank you for your kindness.

[Emerald Seas]

You're welcome, Jack :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A beautiful love song for the season, Jack - lovely imagery!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for smiling on my page today Rita. Merry Christmas to you and your family.