Beneath this dark...soft, silent sky (For Frieda...awaiting your smile)

 

 

Beneath this dark…soft, silent sky

(For Frieda…awaiting your smile)

 

 

 

 

Beneath this dark…soft silent sky

where starlight teardrops weep

in moon glow feathered sonnets…

my heart seeks

~ 

Clinging to every hope,

laced of tiny woven dreams

now filtered through weary eyes

and worried sighs

 ~

Collecting each moment shared

within my weathered hands…mixed

with essence of posy and

butterfly song

 ~

Woven together in melodic patterns,

colorful arcs on golden horizons

bidding me a good evening while

riding in on the sweetest of mystic zephyrs…

 ~

as another tear paints my cheek

in transparent worry

and desperate longing for that day

when your smile reappears

 ~

For here sits my whispered wishes,

behind tufted clouds of life,

touching me with poetic joy,

allowing me to breathe freely

 ~

Beneath this dark…soft silent sky

where starlight teardrops weep

in moon glow feathered sonnets…

I shall wait…for your smile

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fabulous, heart felt and hits home.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Thomas

[Rita L. Sev]

I've missed your beautiful and heartfelt poems, Jack. Your words echo how many of us feel. I hope she reads this, soon, and knows how much she has been missed...

[Jack...]

I hope so too Rita. Thanks so much for your kindness

[Anand Sehgal]

Each paragraph took me to a different level of manifestation. Mesmerizing write :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much for the kind words my friend.

[Jack...]

She is so missed by us all.... sigh Jack, this write gives me goosebumps... the trust you give through your words, shall comfort her, in anyway... I hope she reads it, and knows how she's loved, and missed, but I love the idea of giving her all the time she needs, and when she comes back we will be here with open arms. Touching, and beautifully written.

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I always appreciate your visits.

You're very welcome Jack, it's my pleasure.

[kublakhan27]

The longer she is absent, the clearer it becomes to me that she is a muse. Gorgeous work my friend, and nice to see you writing again, albeit for less than desirable reasons.

[Jack...]

Well we have to take what we have and run with it (unless it is scissors). Thanks so much Steve for stopping by.

[kublakhan27]

Indeed my friend...always a pleasure.

[Diana]

Sweet anticipation... I hope she answers soon.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Marie]

A beautiful poem of waiting and sadness...a smile can mean so much--especially when it isn't here...

[Jack...]

Thank you Marie. I appreciate your kind words.

[Pryde Foltz]

A lovely tribute. We all miss her.

[Jack...]

Thank you Pryde for gracing my page once more with your beautiful smile.

[Baby Ricochet]

Glad to see you back jack. We're all waiting for Frieda to come back. Beautifully written my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[SyberRose]

Beautiful and heartfelt Jack...enjoyed as always...nice to see you...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rose. It is nice to see you as well.