I have not been on here in a while. Funny that the first poem I select is my exact emotion. As always well done! You know the soul the human spirit very well.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Miaishia, I am happy you chose mine first. :) I appreciate your kindness
Firstly, my apologies for not being able to read your beautiful writings lately.
Secondly, this poem is very beautiful, dear friend. You are a very great poet.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Mehak, I appreciate your kindness always and no apology needed.
I love "zephyrs of despair" - a perfect image of how things get swept away out of control. You have used some incredibly powerful metaphor in this piece and nice alliteration in the second stanza. It ends on a note of hope. This is a delicate write that I really enjoyed. Justine :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Justine, your sweet words always thrill me. Thank you so much for visiting my poetry today.
10 Years Ago
If I need inspiration or just a pleasant distraction, I know exactly where to come :)
Thank yo.. read moreIf I need inspiration or just a pleasant distraction, I know exactly where to come :)
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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..