To my Heart Surgeon/Dentist Senryu

Fill this cavity

in my chest, left of center

where my heart had been

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow, if only Jack.... Not sure I'd let me Dentist touch my heart though -- lovely write as always.

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend. I'm sure if he touched yours it would only be to place a beautiful crown on it.

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW, if only a dentist could help fill the cavity of a broken heart. What a concept. I like this a lot. lydi**

[Jack...]

Does anyone know how to get a hold of David Scott? Thanks so much my sweet friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

I just read a poem he posted today....try commenting on his poem "the empty noose".

[Jack...]

I was just kidding my friend...he is a dentist. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Ohhhhh....duh! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A poignant and deceptively simple piece Jack. So you would let you dentist free inside your chest cavity?

[Jack...]

Wouldn't make any difference right now my friend, he couldn't make it any worse. Thanks for taking the time to visit and read.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hope you are not ill dear Jack?