To my Heart Surgeon/Dentist Senryu

Fill this cavity

in my chest, left of center

where my heart had been

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

somewhat funny but deep as down jack...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Penlady]

Oh, my! What a great poem...so few words...but such meaning!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. Happy you enjoyed this.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Now that would be a wonderful feat if a surgeon or dentist could fill such a hole, s(he) could make a mint and would have lines down the street all day. i enjoyed your senryu very much, Jack. It's very clever - your imagination is definitely in overdrive!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Joyce. Asd long as he doesn't use that high pitched drill, I will be fine.

[Angi]

Dentists freak me out. I have to be dragged there kicking and screaming. I am thinking this would be looked upon as an emergency, Jack. I hope you are ok, mister. My message box is just sitting there idle if you need an ear. Confidentiality is what the doctor guarantees. xoxo Angi~

[Jack...]

Thanks Angi, I'll keep that in mind.

[Marie]

Obviously you need a transplant...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marie

[Hitchhiker]

Great senryu, Jack. Not difficult to figure out the reason behind this write.

I sense misery
A love found and then it's gone
Only time brings peace

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[icelandicblue]

When I read this poem a drop down menu came up on my computer and said call a dentist now! This is very cleverly written.

[Jack...]

Thanks Anne and that is funny.

[Pryde Foltz]

Nice one, Jack. But your heart is still there and full, maybe the dentist just used to much Novocain. tee her.

[Jack...]

You could be right my friend. Thanks so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

Now that's a void that no amount of fluoride can prevent... Clever senryu, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rita.

[Sami Khalil]

I know of David on this site who is a dentist...As for a heart doctor you are on your own Jack...A unique and good write...:)...................

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. Yeah I know David is a DDS...help!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................