A very lovely poem. I love the gentle flow of the words and the beautiful pictures that you painted with them. Wonderful message in it as well. 100+
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Gleb. I assume from your avatar you are a pianist? I am too.
11 Years Ago
Yes, in fact I am. I'm delighted to know that you are too. :)
11 Years Ago
Is there anywhere I can hear you? The girl right below this comment, Frieda, if you find her poem E.. read moreIs there anywhere I can hear you? The girl right below this comment, Frieda, if you find her poem Exhale Poetry, you can hear some of my work. I composed a piece for her poem.
Yes, I compose. However, I haven't really posted any of my musical works yet. Hopefully I will soon... read moreYes, I compose. However, I haven't really posted any of my musical works yet. Hopefully I will soon.
11 Years Ago
That song is amazing!
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much. That is how the poem made me feel.
This is a joy to read Jack, you've packed it all in there, everything to lift the spirit and make this journey luverly each step of the way. Very sweet my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Frieda. Hopefully this lighthearted piece helped you feel a little better.
There is a tender ambiance that flows through your words... lifting us all like a song... How I wish everyone had the eyes to see the world like this... there would be so much less pain.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Craig. I appreciate you stopping by today.
So beautiful and left me smiling. I loved how it just flowed along, I felt like "skipping" while I was reading it. I didn't, but I wanted to. Hmmm.. I might later, because now that's all I want to do. lol To sum it up, it made me feel happy :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Dye. If this poem made you happy, then it has made me happy as well.
For some reason I feel there's an invitation in this poem. It's as if you'd like readers to feel as you do right now..share that free, sweet flight of somewhere over the rainbow thought and hope. Just read it for the third time and I'm smiling, tis joyful and loving! Love it!
'Merry-go-rounds ~ Ferris wheel rides ~ Carnival laughter ~ From deep inside ' A human being couldn't feel more alive.. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my sweet Garden Girl. Anytime I can make you smile, it is a grand day for me.
One of my favorite songs is Louis Armstrong's "What a Wonderful World". I heard Louis singing as I read your poem, Jack - a joy-filled homage to the wonder and delight that is love. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Rita. I am happy you found this one and left such kind words to me.
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..