A vast and waking view

A vast and waking view

A Poem by Jack...

A vast and waking view

 

A vast and waking view

before my eyes this day

Of effervescent blue

that carries me away

 

Along a clouded seam

of visions now to find

This open endless sea

caresses to remind

 

That any day is free

if only we will share

The truth and honesty

of which we are aware

 

To journey near and far

where ever we may go

I come to give you praise

upon these winds a’ flow

 

For I have seen your eyes

so deep of perfect dream

Beliefs become my smile

of this my wondrous scene

 

My heart does beat this way

in love with only you

Come carry me away

a vast and waking view

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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If I could wake up to that sort of view, I'd be glad to do it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

It would be nice, wouldn't it. Thanks again my friend.
This is beautiful Jack. Such lovely thoughts especially on such a cold, windy day/night for me.

// My heart does beat this way
in love with only you
Come carry me away
a vast and waking view //

So utterly romantic, you're going to have the ladies swooning again, my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend, but I think my swoon producing days are long gone... :)
s y e

10 Years Ago

No way my friend, I'll bet you all the money I have that most of the ladies reading this will be swo.. read more
Luverly thoughts especially on this frigid, snowy day, warms my heart...wish it would work on my tootsies too. ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Maybe you need some fuzzy socks...thanks so much Frieda. Always I am thrilled when you visit my worl.. read more
My waking view was snow...lots of white cold stuff. Cant wait to view spring.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

I understand...thanks so much for stopping by today Red.
A beautiful view...
Reads quite lovely
Have a wonderful day my friend
And thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Holly. It is so nice to see you again.

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Added on October 21, 2013
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San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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