Bluebirds and butterflies

Just a little one for Monday

 

 

 

The bluest birds

and butterflies

a’ float upon

these autumn skies

 

The air so clear

and so pristine

as if we’ve walked

into a dream

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nature sometimes seems dream like, it's so lovely. You captured the beauty well in this short write, and nice picture to go along with it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Victoria

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

SHORT AND SWEET! IT IS TO THE POINT AND I LOVE IT. THE PICTURE IS A NICE TOUCH, TOO.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. Yes, this is one of my Hallmark moments. :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are Welcome! Have a good day!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Ahh!!! Words to brighten my day..It is a beautiful passionate work that accompanies a lovely art work..I truly enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Your presence at my Diamente brightened my..I have been quite ill for about a week now but feel that there is some improvement in my condition today..Sara

[Jack...]

Happy to hear you are feeling a bit better Sara. I hope you get well soon. Thank you so much for your kind words here today. You have found my smile and handed it to me. :)

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Jack,

I am blessed to be able to read so many wonderful poets on the internet..

Sara

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Lyrical cadence at its best, my friend. So simple, and yet within the confines of such a concise portrayal, you were able to write an entire mood that seeped into me and made me smile. Your pen strokes hit the mark with this one, my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Sarah.

[Frieda P]

Very sweet Jack, sounds like a beautiful nature call, and you know how much a love a flutterby....

[Jack...]

Yep, nature...I guess that's where I'm headed. Thanks so much Frieda.

[Cassie]

I wish I read this on monday because it kind of makes monday better. Thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Cassie

[Lydia Shutter]

Nature and romance beautifully woven together in this little gem. Gorgeous imagery, Jack. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lydi.

[Dhaye]

This is cute, Jack. Nice piece to start the night with a smile. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Joyce S. Greene]

So very lovely, Jack. You have a beautiful soul and it shines brightly in your poetry. Loved the graphic, too. A very special poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Joyce.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A gorgeous little piece for any day of the week Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much John.