Such potent emotion in this beautiful write, Jack! To love someone that much, to know you only want that person to be with you till you breathe your last breath, is to truly live. Just beautiful. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very, very much Lydi. I can not believe the smiles that find me when you wander over to.. read moreThank you so very, very much Lydi. I can not believe the smiles that find me when you wander over to my poetry.
Normally I hate poems but I liked this one. It was short but I believe you made your point well. I like the emotion behind it and the final moments and what some of those thoughts might be. Good.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much. I am happy it was my poem that you found enjoyable.
Wow. So sad but beautiful though jack. It is so wonderful to know that you want her to be your last memory. Long live the poet and long live the memories...Bravo
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..