Final Memory

 

 

 

 

 

When

death on darkened skies

through my window

flies

 

My

wish in pleading sighs

is that before my

eyes

 

Your

face is what I see

of this last breath I

breathe

 

So

nothing else shall be

my final

memory

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

So much love. Well done, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Pryde

[Gleb Zavlanov]

An incredibly beautiful, lyrical, heartfelt piece. I love its musical quality. It's so enchanting, so mesmerizing, yet simple. Wonderful work!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

What a lovely sentiment, and expertly crafted! Love this one, Jack!

[Jack...]

Rita, always I enjoy your visits to my poetry. Thank you so very much.

[Diana]

The desire to see someone's face one last time... Well-articulated. A poignant piece.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Diana

[Mark]

It would be nice to have someone to share life with, until death. I'm sure it happens all the time right? LOL

[Jack...]

I guess it does somewhere my friend, at least in poetry. Thanks so much.

[TL Boehm]

This poem was haunting and beautiful - but there is a sadness to it I can't articulate. Perhaps it is in the knowing that everything ends.

[Jack...]

Thank you Tammy for your kind words and friendship.

[Anand Sehgal]

terse and yet so much written in it. beautiful :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much

[Dr. Wood ?]

ahhhhh

Thanks

I take it you were referring to me

Great poem Jack, as usual

[Jack...]

How did you know Doc. Am I that obvious? Thanks my friend.

[Dr. Wood ?]

ha ha...................

[icelandicblue]

So succinct and so loving. Let death not be our final journey for the energy of love exists within us and I hope beyond us. It's a beautiful poem Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend.

[Neon]

What a wondrous poem. Am thrilled reading the poem. It's a poem with Rhyme, of deep thoughts, of deep imaginations and of course a poem that's written in a very harmonious way. Beautiful work.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much for stopping by.

[Neon]

Your Welcome, Jack .. by the way, i've saved your this splendid poem :)