As Lovers Dance

 

 

 

 

 

Channeling dance steps on our heart beat desires

Melodies drift in endless echoed whims

through the still valleys of our minds

Volumes of favorite pulled titles

vinyl placed orb’d grooves,

hold out their hands,

reaching for us

in memories

of days

gone

by

 

 

we

smile

and sway

to the rhythm

of this love we feel

Pure harmonic embrace

meets us on the dance floor

as our bodies touch and our eyes

fall deep within the sounds of affection

when we find were are one with the music

channeling dance steps on our heart beat desires

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Diana]

I love the shape of this, the beauty, the lyricism, the flow. It looks like an hour glass, time perhaps?

[Jack...]

It's always time to dance my sweet friend. Thank you so very much.

[Angel]

This is a beautiful, slow waltz...humming and dancing, here, my romantic friend...

[Jack...]

Thank you sweet Angel. Your kindness always thrills me.

[Angel]

As your sweet, romantic poetry does me...

[icelandicblue]

Beautiful in structure and sentiment Jack. It is softly romantic.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne. Happy you enjoyed this

[Pryde Foltz]

Lovely to read and to look at. Awesome write.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Pryde. I appreciate you my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

A glorious poem of love dancing gracefully down the page. I liked the shape....not easy to write a shape poem. So romantic. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Lydi. I appreciate your dancing over to my page.

[LadySoDivine]

Excellent poem, Jack. I really like the hourglass shape of the poem, and the fact that the last line is a repetition of the first one. As always, your words touched my heart. Well done, my friend! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you my sweet friend. It is your reviews that touch my heart.

[Ruth]

What a stunning flow Jack! The structure to this is awe inspiring too...heartfelt and elegant! x

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Poppy. I always appreciate your kind words.

[B-poet]

Loved the ingenius hour glass written format. This also reminds me of a nice romantic ballad. Great work Jack. A riveting & compelling read. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Frieda P]

I think my rhythm might be off due to the flu, but this gave me dance fever, not to mention it's clever, romantic and you rock Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my sweet friend. Whenever you are feeling up to it, I am ready to dance.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow Jack. Pure creativity as far as form and imagery...Let your dance continue to sway us...Bravo

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Sami. I appreciate your visit today.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:>)...........