As Lovers Dance

 

 

 

 

 

Channeling dance steps on our heart beat desires

Melodies drift in endless echoed whims

through the still valleys of our minds

Volumes of favorite pulled titles

vinyl placed orb’d grooves,

hold out their hands,

reaching for us

in memories

of days

gone

by

 

 

we

smile

and sway

to the rhythm

of this love we feel

Pure harmonic embrace

meets us on the dance floor

as our bodies touch and our eyes

fall deep within the sounds of affection

when we find were are one with the music

channeling dance steps on our heart beat desires

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[annie lee]

Beautiful expression, and of course, I love the format and typography.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Annie. I always appreciate your visits to my world.

[Neon]

What a great creation of your mind, Jack .. i loved this way. What a great way to write the poem with the well designed formula. I loved the piece that's so powerful with your words of love. An excellent job.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[kublakhan27]

This is an incredible piece my friend, in every possible way. Every line and image is truly special, but I liked the vinyl placed orb’d grooves in particular, which may not surprise you if you remember some of my past pieces haha This is definitely one to be proud of, and will promptly be sent to my library. Love this one.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend and I do remember our conversation on LP's.

[TL Boehm]

beautiful in form and in content Jack. Pure harmonic embrace - that's my favorite line I think

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Tammy.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This is so clever Jack, I like the way this poem, reminds me of the shape of a sound system blurting out, written to precision, fantastic!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. What a cool description of the shape. I appreciate your visit.

[Mark]

Music and love... emotion... I've always marveled at how music can evoke such strong emotion. Good write. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Mark.

[Anand Sehgal]

when we find were are one with the music

channeling dance steps on our heart beat desires....

lovely lines and lovely form :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. I appreciate your kind words today.

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, wow to this! The visual form is elegant and the wording is beautiful; first and last lines match to perfectly contain the wonderful poem between. Impressive poem on all scores, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Rita. Your sweet words always make me smile (and dance).

[MsJewel]

Beautifully sweet and romantic. A gorgeous poem Jack!

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A charming shape poem Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks John