Love me

Love me

A Poem by Jack...
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Love me...need I say more?

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Love me

 

 

Kiss me

For your lips are my desire

Touch me

Know my skin it does require

Hold me

Like you’ll never let me go

Love me

For you know I love you so

 

Squeeze me

With your arms so very tight

Tease me

With your beauty every night

Feel me

With your hands that I adore

Show me

That you couldn’t love me more

 

Thrill me

With your eyes of chocolate brown

Lift me

When I’ve fallen to the ground

Help me

When you know I’ve lost my way

Teach me

Of your love now everyday

 

Fill me

With your love so very warm

Save me

When I’m standing in a storm

Keep me

Ever closer to your side

Trust me

With the secrets you confide

 

Hear me

As I whisper in your ear

Find me

Ever wanting to be near

Tell me

You forever will be true

Love me

For I always will love you

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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ah...you old sweet talker , you

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Yep, you got that right...old...sweet...talker (emphasis on old). Together or apart, that is me. Tha.. read more
How do you do it Jack?? Writing with such romantic lines and complete emotion. Beautiful....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Hey, I'm a lover not a fighter...most of the time. :) Thanks so much my beautiful friend.
A sweet and romantic little song of love Jack. You write these so well my friend. This is poetry that sighs were made for!

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Julie. Happy I could provide a sigh today.
mmmmm..,Yummy! You need to set this to music, Hon. I can almost hear it, in that sweet, melted caramel voice of yours...heavenly. This one makes me feel all melty soft inside. I could almost forgive you for making me cry with the last piece...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Melted caramel voice...now that really makes me smile. Thanks so much my sweet friend.
Angel

11 Years Ago

Darlin', when you croon, the ladies swoon...
;-D...
Even Angels feel the effect of your .. read more
Now that is a song to be sung for lovers. Splendid indeed...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sami, I appreciate you stopping by today.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
I can see you playing this on the piano...delightful and romantic as always and enjoyed the form Jack...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much sweet Rose.
what a beauty Jack! Very romantic, doesn't miss a beat but I bet ladies all over the world will experience a skip or two over this one :) bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Corset. I appreciate you visiting my world today.
This needs to be a love song Jack, you need to sit down and compose the music for this lovely declaration of love, it has a rhythm all its own, kind of love itself. Great stuff my sweet friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my wonderful friend. How could I refuse a request like that from such a beautiful wom.. read more
You created a poetic call to action.
Love put into actions is the most desirable.
Theoretical and passive adoration does very little to satiate the human need for being loved, understood, and comforted.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much David. Your kind words are always welcomed and greatly appreciated.
A declaration of deep romantic love...the sort that fairy tales are written about! The two word lines were so effective. The desire feels honest and the longing is palpable. Wonderful work, Jack. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweet Lydi. I am happy you enjoyed this little love poem.

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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