Sent with love

I just love sharing the sunrise with you

 

 

Sent with love

 

Through wooden blinds uneven slats

the sun appears to shine

Beyond the storms of later night,

in just the nick of time

 

With cooler breeze of air to flow

and wishing wells so deep

Dreams cast in coins to bottoms fall

that you my heart shall keep

 

For in this winded poet stirs,

a passion constant strong

The feel for words to touch your soul

amidst an autumn song

 

With distant far off tendencies,

to reach is but a chore

Yet through these words I hope you find,

it’s you I do adore

 

And I shall take this sunrise glow

with every breath as new

Believing it is sent with love,

to me from only you

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Absolutely stunning!
:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Julie

[Justsimplyjulia]

ever the romantic Jack, you never cease to impress me. LOVED IT!
:) -Dragon

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Dragon for stopping by.

[LadySoDivine]

Once again, you have managed to create such an exquisite love poem, Jack. I love the rhyming and I love the feeling of the sea and summer that I got from reading it. Your perception of love is quite refreshing and it's really wonderful to see that there are still people who believe in the strength and power of love. :) Truly, I think that love is the only thing that can last longer than time itself.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend and I agree with you 100%. true love is a blessing that will span time.

[SarahLin]

I really like this one nicely done..

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Sarahlin. I appreciate your kind words.

[Leigh]

A Very soft and loving verse, seeing the sun in the morning is truly beautiful

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Leigh.

[annie lee]

I find this a very gentle enchanting declaration, a lovely sharing of oneself and the sunrise with the only one who matters. Well done.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind words.

[s y e]

I love the sunrise too, it has so much beautiful colours and lights the sky up in a gorgeous way, it's magical and truly something to share with a loved one.

[Jack...]

Indeed it is my friend, indeed it is.

[Diana]

I like the juxtaposition of the "winded poet" and the breeze in the earlier stanza. Nice job.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Diana. I appreciate your visits to my world.

[teardrop]

such an amazing beautiful write.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind words today. Very nice to meet you.

[InsanityWriter]

Positively beautiful! It flows perfectly, and every word fits so well. ;) Excellently10, excellently done.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. Happy you stopped by today, I always smile when you visit.