A rainy day

Love beneath the umbrella

 

 

 

 

A rainy day,

two hearts in love

Moisture falls

from up above

 

We don’t care,

bring the storm

Our love is here

to keep us warm

 

As we walk,

laugh and play

This is our

rainy day

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Very sweet. :) Coincidentally, as I read this, it's raining outside! Lovely job Jack... I really like this one. ;)

[Jack...]

Happy it was appropriate my friend. Thank you so much.

[Corset]

This was lovely Jack, love the picture and how you are not afraid to write a romantic breeze into being, it just makes me smile to myself when people shun such things, because it's obvious that they have never been there before, I appreciate an artist that is not afraid to explore every aspect of poetry. Especially romantic poetry because it shows how confident he is in that arena.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Corset. I appreciate your kind words today...I needed them.

[Corset]

In that case I'm so glad that I happened in :)

[Marie]

Rain can be a kind thing to lovers...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marie.

[redflutterby]

Short but sweet...sometimes love doesn't need more then that to describe it.;-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Frieda P]

Sweet little ditty Jack, rainy days are so much better when you're in love.....

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Sometimes, I think the soul truly aches for such a day...I know mine does, and I'm still waiting. Thank you for the feel of this one, Jack!

My best,
Kelly

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Kelly

[Lydia Shutter]

Such romantic innocence....and very appropos for my day. We have had record rainfalls here since yesterday. Tropical Storm Karen is bringing it all to South Florida. Catchy cadence and rhyme in this one, Jack. I liked it. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Lydi.