Drenched

 

 

Within my heart resides

an ever wondrous song

~drenched~

in blush tuned daydreams,

oh won’t you sing along

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

You've got a subtle beauty here Jack. It is beautiful in its seemingly simplicity.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne.

[OTownPete]

Hum me a few bars and I'll try to jump on in Jack.

[Jack...]

Humming here Pete. Thanks so much.

[Angel]

We are all learning to sing this beautiful song, drenched in the daydreams your lovely poetry brings...
This exquisite piece will have me humming all day!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sweet Angel. Sing loud, sing often

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Another impeccably written snippet of sensuality in the beautiful tones of non-overt wording and language. I think that you make us all want to sing along, Jack. The blooming of your emotion, written on these pages, is nothing short of awe inspiring.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sarah. Happy this had you singing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

To be sated with such emotion, is to be drenched from it...love your interpretation, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kelly

[redflutterby]

Songs and drenching...what could be better?? Lol... Great poem Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Short and sweet. Sounds like a dream date

[Jack...]

Thank you sir.

[TL Boehm]

a song drenched in daydreams. Ah. Love that.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Tammy.

[Frieda P]

Can I just linger here and dance in your luverly daydream....'drenched' now there's a word.

[Jack...]

Frieda, you can linger here as long as you like. Thank you so very much.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the word drenched alot and this poem. Drenched in beauty...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...See you during the day...:)