Drenched

 

 

Within my heart resides

an ever wondrous song

~drenched~

in blush tuned daydreams,

oh won’t you sing along

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Tom]

A thrilling invitation to get down and wet together !

Sizzling indeed Jack !

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Blush tuned daydreams... Lovely, Jack. This poem is enough to sweep any girl off her feet. :) Keep the blush coming. ;)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Blue, but to be honest and give credit where credit is due...Frieda suggested that line to me when she first read this poem.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Oh, as expected of Frieda. :) And of course, you did well. I'm having trouble in writing a short poem that says so much. You seem to be a natural..

[Jack...]

Sometimes it just works out that way for me. I get lucky every once in a while.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

You get lucky always. ;) Thanks for your RRs. I enjoy reading your work. ;)

[Emerald Seas]

Short and to the point - with a sultry undertone. Niiiiice! ;-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Diana]

I like the notion of being "drenched" in daydreams. You feel the daydream in every pore. Water is the lifeblood, or so they say. But, so too are dreams perhaps? Lovely, little read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[kublakhan27]

You say much in a short space here my friend...that one word has the potential to take these lines into all kinds of different areas, but romance will be always be the core of this piece...lovely work.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Steve

[Rita L. Sev]

The best kind of song to sing - one drenched in daydreams, and meant to share... This piece lightens the heart, Jack! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita

[s y e]

This is a great piece Jack. A very uplifting write.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Pryde Foltz]

Laaaaaaaa. Great one.

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.

[Keith]

Great uplifting piece. perfect image too.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Keith

[Melobldnfr]

This is one of the most lovely little writes my eyes have had the pleasure of stumbling upon, Jack. Perfect. Would you mind if I shared it with someone?

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Mel. Please be my guest and share it with whomever you like.

[Melobldnfr]

Thank you Jack. You are quite welcome.