Poetry

 

 

 

 

Poetry

 

Sent to trace

Perfect prose

Steady pace

Passion’s truth

We embrace

Flowing grace

Poetry

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Written rhymes

Syllables

Precious lines

Offerings

Hearts defined

Forever kind

Poetry

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Sent to you

Lavished love

Always true

Endlessly

Calming view

Forever new

Poetry

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Hearts afire

Bloom this day

True desire

Eternally

Angelic choir

For you inspire

Poetry

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[OTownPete]

Yep, I'd say you've pretty much touched on the glowing buttons controlling poetry Jack. Your friend in words, pete

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Poetry indeed, my friend. It was fitting that I read this tonight, as the piece I am about to upload is about the "Poetry within me", which reminds me a lot of what you have written...of course mine goes into a bunch of off the wall, likely oversturated metaphors, but then again, that's what I'm known for, right? ;) Your writing is always so concise and beautifully structured, and still maintains the emotional impact; for that I truly admire you!

[Jack...]

Sarah, my friend, you style to me is inspiring. I love the way you write "Off the wall". I have learne a lot from you. So, "What I am known for" to me = an amazing style. I am happy you enjoyed this poem and I look forward to reading yours.

[Pryde Foltz]

Poetry a drug most divine
but no pesky hangover
unlike wine

Great one, my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks Pryde...although druken poetry can not hold that claim. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

I written some pretty raw stuff drunk but then the grammar was atrocious. I kid. Don't drink kids it's bad for you.

[Jack...]

I never drink kids...usually beer or vodka.

[Pryde Foltz]

lmao.........}

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow this person really is a muse for you...lovely writing...a smooth pace...gentle words...loving words.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Jacob

[Frieda P]

Wow this just rolls off the tongue, and floats off the page Jack, I want to dance in your poetry....love this one my friend!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much sweet Frieda. I am happy you enjoyed this because I know how much you like poetry about poerty. Always I appreciate you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Well, whomever or whatever inspires you, I thank him/her/it because the poetry you write is always a pleasure to read, Jack. I liked the short lines in this one. Made for a rhythmic cadence! Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Lydi. I have some great sources of inspiration and you my friend are one of them.