Undressing nature

A rendezvous with nature

 

 

 

 

Undressing nature

 

Lovely pink roses on a stone wall
like buttons on a cotton dress
climbing to the top
opening when the light finds
so many interludes frolicking beyond the
painted iron gate

Swinging hinges sing the melody of love
as soft thorns pull at cloth canopies
of translucent chiffon and soft lace hue,
releasing vine clung threads,
knotted of perfume, watching as buttons
free fall to the lawn, like so many petals

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Cassie]

mhhhh...I love love this. How are you my dear friend

[Jack...]

Thanks you Sunshine. I am fine, the big question is how are you doing? How do you feel?

[Cassie]

I am doing well though I have a million things to do that is why I have not been able to post what I have been writing here. Soon perhaps end of october I will be a bit flexible. Thank you so much for checking up on me

[Jack...]

So what is causing all of this business?

[Cassie]

I have exams next week, so many term papers to do, work and I have to deliver then still motherhood and being a wife. All this things are kind of weighing me down especially school.

[Jack...]

Well just stay strong my friend, you will get through it all just fine.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Had I not known that this piece is written by you, I would have assumed that this is penned by some meticulous female. Very detailed and well-written. I love the title. It's sexy. :)

[Jack...]

That's funny. Thanks so much Blue. I happen to love women and writing in a style that they might like is something I work hard on.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Well, you've achieved it pretty well! :)

[Frieda P]

Soft and sweet and somehow now I feel naked after reading this one Jack...!

as soft thorns pull at cloth canopies

Love that line....

[Jack...]

Sweet Frieda, everytime I find you on my page I smile. Your kind words always to me are what keep me going. Thank you so very much for your kindness and your friendship. It is an amazing feeling to have a poet one admires so much visit and say they like your poetry.

[Anand Sehgal]

opening when the light finds
so many interludes frolicking beyond the
painted iron gate

exploring a bigger world , looking at a bigger picture :) very good write

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Pryde Foltz]

Nature? Is that what she's calling herself these days? Quite a sexy write here. I'm blushing.

[Jack...]

My friend Pryde...do tell, what else might she call herself? Thanks so much my good friend. I can always count on you to lift my day.

[MsJewel]

This is soft and sensual and almost dream like - like floating above this beautiful scene you have described. So many lovely lines, if I were to pick my favorite, I'd be reciting the entire poem. I think I have found my new favorite by you!

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Julie. Your sweet words have thrilled me this morning

[Carolann Dowsett]

Very dreamy and beautiful Jack.

[Jack...]

Carolann, to see you here again reading my poetry is a dream come true. Welcome back my friend and thank you so much for your kind words.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Jack. I always love reading your wonderful poems.

[icelandicblue]

There are so many inviting textures in this piece. I read these words more than once just to let them roll through my mind:

Lovely pink roses on a stone wall
like buttons on a cotton dress

[Jack...]

Anne, I am so happy you enjoyed this. Always I am thrilled when you visit.

[Angel]

Once again, you have amazed me with your soft and beautiful poetry, my friend. This literally takes my breath away.
Twirling through the rose garden to the soft strains of Fur d'elise...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet Angel. I am happy this one found you smiling.

[LL]

There must be a true artist behind this and his name is Jack! Well done!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend for your kind words.