Undressing nature

A rendezvous with nature

 

 

 

 

Undressing nature

 

Lovely pink roses on a stone wall
like buttons on a cotton dress
climbing to the top
opening when the light finds
so many interludes frolicking beyond the
painted iron gate

Swinging hinges sing the melody of love
as soft thorns pull at cloth canopies
of translucent chiffon and soft lace hue,
releasing vine clung threads,
knotted of perfume, watching as buttons
free fall to the lawn, like so many petals

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

This is quite lovely. That picture too offsets it so well. I'm guessing there is that deeper meaning which wasn't lost but it is nice to just hover over this one and imagine...

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Tammy. Your smile always brightens my day.

[Keith]

Wonderful images there Jack.

[Jack...]

Howdy Keith. Happy you stopped by this morning (my time).

[Kelly Scheppers]

...you have such an eloquent touch, Jack! I love how you described "watching buttons free fall to the lawn, like so many petals". The sensuality is subtle, like a summer breeze itself...so pretty!

[Jack...]

Your kind words always make me smile Kelly. I appreciate you.

[Rita L. Sev]

Such a lovely analogy, with a wink of seduction. Very nice, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rita.

[Marie]

I like this short poem...the anology to a dress is wonderful...

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Marie.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Your descriptions are impeccable Jack, this was a real pleasure to read, very well done!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. I appreciate your kind words this day.

[kublakhan27]

Gorgeous piece, idyllic and gently erotic...well done my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Read all natural to me...........

[Jack...]

Thanks so much sir.

[Emerald Seas]

Well, that is quite clever! Just a hint of seduction going on here. ;)

[Jack...]

Smiling because of your kind words my sweet friend. yes, just a hint... :) Thanks so much.

[Emerald Seas]

You're welcome, of course.

[Lydia Shutter]

The simile is brilliant...."like buttons on a cotton dress climbing to the top" and the image that creates is softly romantic. Nature and love beautifully woven together in this one, Jack. Wonderful. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Lydi for stopping by and saying hi this morning. I am always thrilled by your visits.