Undressing nature

A rendezvous with nature

 

 

 

 

Undressing nature

 

Lovely pink roses on a stone wall
like buttons on a cotton dress
climbing to the top
opening when the light finds
so many interludes frolicking beyond the
painted iron gate

Swinging hinges sing the melody of love
as soft thorns pull at cloth canopies
of translucent chiffon and soft lace hue,
releasing vine clung threads,
knotted of perfume, watching as buttons
free fall to the lawn, like so many petals

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Great expressions throughout....
I loved it :)

Singh :)
Cheers!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

See, for me this is true sensuality. One need not be expressedly overt in the telling of a thing to make a point; you speak in soft tones, muted colors that are all the more dazzeling than their "primary" kin. Beautiful imagery and metaphor in this one. You are an absolute joy to read, my friend. I felt this one...like a love poem to the heart of all the women of the world.

[Jack...]

Sarah, your comments always make me smile and touch my heart. Thank you for your kindness and friendship.

[Stevo The POE-t]

Really great job here... I really enjoyed reading it... Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read what's next from you... Thanks for sharing...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sir. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving such kind words for me.

[LadySoDivine]

Ah, this paints such a wonderful picture in my head! I am a naturalist, and I find myself every time in raw nature, untouched by the hand of man. So reading something so beautiful and written by an excellent poet such as yourself pleases me oh so very much, Jack. Thank you for sharing this, it made my day!

[Jack...]

Happy this one touch you my sweet friend. I am humbled by your kind words today.

[Laminators Dubai]

who imagined that undressing can be that beautiful.....at least not me....
great job jack...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Glitch.

[s y e]

I loved the description in this one Jack, you've written it really well.

Very cool.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend.

[Night]

Beautifully crafted. The pulchritude of Mother Nature is fully exposed in this grand masterpiece. Your words unfurl a maiden of grace and innocence falling in love for the first time. Your talent can not be expressed in words!

Thank you for sharing!

[Jack...]

Night, I appreciate your beautiful words to me this day. Thank you ever so much.

[Night]

My pleasure!

[Shivam Murari]

Imagery.. so well penned :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Nickolas]

First off, nice picture, it does add something to it! The descriptive words just painted a picture in my mind, it reminded me of spring or early summer.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Nickolas. I am thrilled you stopped ny and enjoyed my poem.

[Diana]

I am reminded of flowers blooming somewhere in the south. The heat, the languor, the beauty, etc. Very enjoyable read. Entrancing.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind words. I appreciate your visit.