Dancing on a constellation

Dancing on a constellation

A Poem by Jack...
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Fancy footwork amongst the stars

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Dancing on a Constellation

 

Deep within the patterns of a woven ember’s light

Truth becomes a filament that channels every thrill

Illuminating on the sky as features form the void

Culminating in our hearts that gladly find its will

 

Serpentine unwindings through the great expanse of space

Capturing a falling star for but a moment brief

Pondering our every thought as heaven sends its beam

Fueling both the fire and our happy hearts belief

 

Hand in hand we fly upon a moonbeam made of love

Dancing on a constellation, sharing of its light

Casting off the reasons why this day should ever end

Following the movements of this endless evening flight

 

Ours is but a journey that will bring us to the dream

Only in an atmospheric setting shall we play

Here before our eyes awaits the life we wish to start

While we row with happiness throughout the Milky Way

 

Ribbons of a cosmic flow now touch our every pore

Beauty calms the wake before the majesty we’ve seen

Safely carried by a stream celestial in design

As the night does paint the sky in volumes so pristine

 

Now we gaze upon this realm as wide as is our love

Time will be the portal which together we walk through

Welcomed in a fashion that invites our honest smiles

As this day the universe does know that I love you

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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As love encompasses and surrounds this couple, it manifests images of its presence through celestial constellations high up in the heavenly night time sky!

So romantically stellar in every detail Jack !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tom. Happy you stopped by.
A celestial beauty of a write, Jack! The rhyming and rhythm are superb...never forced and flowing so easily. Flying upon a moonbeam made of love....now if that is not the ultimate in romance, nothing is! When the love is as sparkling as the stars in the sky and as vast as the universe, it is forever. A resplendent write, Jack. Just wonderful. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks you so very much Lydi. The universe is an amazing place and to share it with one you love is .. read more

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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