Dancing on a constellation

Fancy footwork amongst the stars

 

 

 

Dancing on a Constellation

 

Deep within the patterns of a woven ember’s light

Truth becomes a filament that channels every thrill

Illuminating on the sky as features form the void

Culminating in our hearts that gladly find its will

 

Serpentine unwindings through the great expanse of space

Capturing a falling star for but a moment brief

Pondering our every thought as heaven sends its beam

Fueling both the fire and our happy hearts belief

 

Hand in hand we fly upon a moonbeam made of love

Dancing on a constellation, sharing of its light

Casting off the reasons why this day should ever end

Following the movements of this endless evening flight

 

Ours is but a journey that will bring us to the dream

Only in an atmospheric setting shall we play

Here before our eyes awaits the life we wish to start

While we row with happiness throughout the Milky Way

 

Ribbons of a cosmic flow now touch our every pore

Beauty calms the wake before the majesty we’ve seen

Safely carried by a stream celestial in design

As the night does paint the sky in volumes so pristine

 

Now we gaze upon this realm as wide as is our love

Time will be the portal which together we walk through

Welcomed in a fashion that invites our honest smiles

As this day the universe does know that I love you

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Fascinating piece... The idea that all people, events, eveything in the universe, are connected by these invisible lines, making coincidence both natural and impossible at the same time, is a beautiful thing. Love is perhaps the most mysterious part of our universe, and yet the most natural in some way. Beautiful texture to this write, my friend.

[Jack...]

Sarah, my friend, as long as poetic lines connect us, I could dance on the bottom of the ocean and not miss a step. Thanks so very much for your always kind words.

[Diana]

The universe as the realm of love...

[Jack...]

As it should be. Thanks so much Diana.

[Sami Khalil]

"Beauty calms the wake before the majesty we’ve seen

Safely carried by a stream celestial in design

As the night does paint the sky in volumes so pristine



Now we gaze upon this realm as wide as is our love"

One of your stellar writes Jack that dances among the constellations of poetic words and spacial beauty...Bravo

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Sami. I appreciate you visiting my page and leaving such nice words for me.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)

[SyberRose]

this makes me think of Fred and Ginger dancing beneath the stars in the moonlight...a stunning write Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rose. Fred and Ginger, what a perfect picture...

[Rita L. Sev]

Looking up at the stars now... this is a poem inspired, and inspiring...

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Rita. See that one just to the left, it is twinkling for you.

[S C]

What a gem! This made put me in such a tranquil mood. Great read! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Sera, Happy this one allowed you to dream.

[Stevo The POE-t]

Really great piece of work you got here man... Thank you for sharing... I really enjoyed it...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Steve.

[Frieda P]

So amazing Jack, this would put stars in any woman's eyes, love the Milky Way reference, it's a step above the moon here, who wouldn't want to get lost in this celestial masterpiece?!

[Jack...]

Put on your dancing shoe Frieda and I show you just how beautiful it is. Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[TL Boehm]

lovely. this poem speaks to me of dreams of flight. I can't remember the last time I had one or looked up to enjoy the stars - but this poem it tugs at the reader to do just that. Beautifully woven poem Jack.

[Jack...]

Maybe you should Tammy, look up some night and see the beauty that is only surpassed by your own. Thank you so much.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

While we row with happiness throughout the Milky Way

I want to do exactly that. Haha. Thank you for taking me out of this world, Jack. :x

[Jack...]

Thank you for dancing with me Blue. Happy you enjoyed this one.