Dancing on a constellation

Fancy footwork amongst the stars

 

 

 

Dancing on a Constellation

 

Deep within the patterns of a woven ember’s light

Truth becomes a filament that channels every thrill

Illuminating on the sky as features form the void

Culminating in our hearts that gladly find its will

 

Serpentine unwindings through the great expanse of space

Capturing a falling star for but a moment brief

Pondering our every thought as heaven sends its beam

Fueling both the fire and our happy hearts belief

 

Hand in hand we fly upon a moonbeam made of love

Dancing on a constellation, sharing of its light

Casting off the reasons why this day should ever end

Following the movements of this endless evening flight

 

Ours is but a journey that will bring us to the dream

Only in an atmospheric setting shall we play

Here before our eyes awaits the life we wish to start

While we row with happiness throughout the Milky Way

 

Ribbons of a cosmic flow now touch our every pore

Beauty calms the wake before the majesty we’ve seen

Safely carried by a stream celestial in design

As the night does paint the sky in volumes so pristine

 

Now we gaze upon this realm as wide as is our love

Time will be the portal which together we walk through

Welcomed in a fashion that invites our honest smiles

As this day the universe does know that I love you

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Leigh]

You combine a voyage in space and a journey to the heart, well written Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Leigh. I appreciate your visit today.

[Leigh]

You are so quick off the mark

[Jack...]

I just happened to be nearby. :)

[Leigh]

Lucky and talented then

[Pryde Foltz]

Ribbons of a cosmic flow now touch our every pore
Beauty calms the wake before the majesty we’ve seen
Safely carried by a stream celestial in design
As the night does paint the sky in volumes so pristine

Brilliant, brilliant imagery.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Pryde. Thrilled you enjoyed this.

[Emerald Seas]

You can take us to the stars and back, Jack. Love the sentiment in this beautiful poem!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sera.

[Keith]

Cellestial romance as only Jack can deliver

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Keith.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Hand in hand we fly upon a moonbeam made of love.................. You have such a glorious way with words Jack. Another gorgeously romantic write. Whoever steals your heart will be a very lucky girl.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Carolann...didn't I tell you, it was you who stole my heart. :) I appreciate you my friend.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Awww you're so sweet Jack.

[Angel]

Once again, you have taken my breath away. This is just magnificent.
A dreamy waltz through the cosmos...ahhh, how lovely.
I'm glad I saved this for last...it is a perfect ending to the day.
I'll be taking these elegant images to bed with me...tucked into my mind, to weave themselves into my dreams...

G'night, Jack!!

[Jack...]

Happy I could touch you in your dreams sweet Angel. Thank you so very much.

[MsJewel]

Hand in hand we fly upon a moonbeam made of love
Dancing on a constellation, sharing of its light
Casting off the reasons why this day should ever end
Following the movements of this endless evening flight
I love the entire poem and the feeling it left me with after reading it. But these four lines are my favorite. There is so much love so much happiness in this gorgeous poem. You have a beautiful heart my friend.

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Julie, as always your kind words have touched my heart and brought a huge smile to my face. Thank you so much.

[s y e]

Think you've bagged yourself a gem Jack - This is great.

[Jack...]

Noodle, my sweet friend, always I am thankful for your visits.

[OTownPete]

Jack, I have to beleive that of all of your pieces I have read this one stands out as my favorite. The flow of the story within is impeccable and the overall joy of the piece undeniable. Your friend in words, Pete

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Pete. Happy you enjoyed this one.

[Dr. Wood ?]

interesting concept Jack and delivered in your usual confident and classy style

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.