The coming of fall

Autumn is just around the corner

 

 

 

The coming of fall

 

Crape myrtle highlights

in chartreuse diversions, oak tree decisions

along brittle stem

Maple leaf push pins and ash scented postcards

Autumn approaches, its fingers to send

 

Northern now breezes

 as petals start falling,  blending the colors

 of September dreams

Days count much shorter and windows are open,

change in direction a’ dance on the stream

 

Standing behind me now

caught in the mirror, reflections of summer

and hummingbird song

leaves painted softer in patterns of wishes

butterfly tickles may happen along

 

Cider on counters

and scarves plaid and woolen, hang from the pegs

in the entryway hall

Come again welcomes on echoes of sunlight

send out the greeting, the coming of fall

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Photograph by me...somewhere in New Jersey

Reviews

[s y e]

Lovely picture firstly. You got a knack for photography too.

I love Autumn, all the beautiful colours in the trees, it's beautiful scenery.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[TL Boehm]

leaves painted softer in patterns of wishes
fall is my favorite time of year. This is a wonderful vibrant tribute to i.t

[Jack...]

Always Tammy, I appreciate your visits. Thanks so much.

[OTownPete]

You have done well to capture the coming of Autumn Jack. Having been reaised in the great North East I witnessed this year after year. Your friend in words, Pete

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Pete. Same place I was raised and I miss Autumn every year at this time.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for sharing what you see when you are out and about this time of year, Jack. you painted a vivid picture. I remember the beauty of fall, but my allergies do not miss it! :) Splendid rhyming in this and I especially liked the concept of "leaves painted softer in patterns of wishes"....dreamy! Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Lydi. Actually, I don't see fall that often in South Texas. The photo was taken last year when I visited my Mom in New Jersey. What I have written today is purely from memory. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Aha! Then you have a vivid memory!

[Jack...]

For now...I just hope I never forget to remember.

[Justsimplyjulia]

OOH! This poem made me FEEL like I was there!!! Incredible! one of your best ones!!!!

Maple leaf push pins and ash scented postcards

I could practically smell cinnamon and apple cider..... Amazing.
-Dragon

[Jack...]

I appreciate your kind words my friend. Thank you so very much for taking your time to read my poem.

[Justsimplyjulia]

:) Its always fun for me to read your work. I look forward to another Read request of yours ;)
-Dragon

[MsJewel]

You are an artist with words, painting beautiful images for the reader to enjoy. We don't really have Autumn in California. Thank you for sharing yours with me. Your poem is stunning.

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Julie. I wrote this from memory as I have lived in South Texas for more than 30 years and we do not have Autumn here either. I grew up in the northeast and every year at this time I miss that feeling. Thanks again my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

I got fall from this. Good job jack

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Emerald Seas]

This definitely has me ready for fall! The coolness in the air and slight hint of color change that is budding all around me is a perfect backdrop to this read. Much enjoyed, my friend!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sweet Sera. I am always happier once you stop by.

[Emerald Seas]

Glad to 'see' you smile then. :D

[Mark]

I miss the New England Autumn. It's probably in full bloom or waning by now. It never lasts more than a couple weeks but it's crisp time with delicious smelling air and beautiful scenery.

[Jack...]

Mark, I guess Lost Maples is the closest thing we will find down here sans the temperature change. Thanks so much for driving by and stopping at my poetic rest stop.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow, you have such a good photograph here! Anyway, I hope to experience the contents of your poem. Never seen autumn. :(

[Jack...]

It is a wonderful time of year if you ever do get to experience it Blue. It truly makes you feel alive again. Thanks so much. I took the photo last year when I visited my family.