Come again ~ Earotic Senyru

For the next time someone gives you an earful

 

 

Come Again " Earotic Senryu

 

I love it when you

whisper those words in my ear…

Oh my, come again

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, you naughty man! :) Adorable. You write these senryus so well. Lydi**

[Jack...]

I was just thinking that your response to my review of "Every night before" must have been a whisper. :) Thank you so very much sweet Lydi.

[Sami Khalil]

A very clever and with a touch or (earotic)...Good luck...lol

[Jack...]

Thanks Sami for listening. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I thought you just misspelled "erotic" when your title says "earotic". LOL. Hmm, such an erotic brief poem indeed. And you said it well in just a few words. Well-done! :x

[Jack...]

Thanks Blue, sometimes I unleash the humor on unsuspecting readers...just to make them smile.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ahaha! I like the term "earotic". It's really absurd that when someone whispers a word which we much like and enters into our senses, we aspire to hear it repeatedly.

Made me smile, Jack. Great job!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Dhaye. Just having a little fun.

[Aethereal]

Yes, a whisper is the best way to be understood. I was inspired to write this gift poem for you:

Volume

Whisper in my ear
songs too loud for me to hear.
Turn your volume down.

[Jack...]

Thank you so mjuch for the visit and the poem. Much appreciated.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Very clever, my friend. Great wordplay in this one, and shows your fun side, which I always enjoy. There is something about the idea of words being "whispered" that is supremely erotic and exotic at the same time. Words are powerful...well done!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sarah.

[Tate Morgan]

It has a ring like Im cocking my pistol while i wait for the answer that depicts your end!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Tate...I think

[Corset]

eh? lol..I loved the play on the word erotic :P This was too funny and thoroughly entertaining. What?

[Jack...]

Quit shouting...will ya (and start whispering) :) Thanks so much Corset. I appreciate you stopping by today for a little of my fun.

[Corset]

it was my pleasure Jack :)

[s y e]

I'm sorry, come again? ;-P This made me laugh (and it sounded weird 'cause of my infection..... :P) I loved this, Jack!

I'M SHOUTING THIS BY THE WAY! CAN YOU HEAR ME???????

[Jack...]

Shhhhh...Noodlehead isn't feeling well...let her rest!

Thanks so much my friend. I hope you feel better soon.

[s y e]

Yeah, that hurt my throat..... I've lost my voice so that wasn't even shouting. I sounded like a frog.

Pleasure and thank you Jackomantic.

[shallimarRose]

lol... love this.. I will never hear that statement in the same way so thank you for that.. lol

I always have thoughts when I here the song Come together.. **winks**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my cute friend. I thought you might like this one. :)