Marigold Melodies

 

 

 

 

Marigold Melodies

 

Marigold melodies whispering soft

Harmonies dream on the wind

Scented illusions of days in the past

And those about to begin

 

Blooming of music in shades tinted yellow

Sweet as the day you were born

Penned in the key of to never forget

Symphonies cast off the storm

 

Beneath a sunrise of violin vistas

Precious this garden of song

Petals in piccolo choruses beaming

Hoping you will sing along

 

Listen as heavenly arias play

Now as the music does start

Find every note is performed just for you

Composed of the love in my heart

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

This poem is so uplifting and optimistic. I love the visuals of the marigolds. Love inspired poems really do become you.

[Jack...]

Anne, if you found joy in this poem then my joy is enhanced. Thank you always for leaving such sweet comments for me.

[OTownPete]

Having read the previous comments I would have to say that you have a hit on your hands Jack. Your friend in words, Pete

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Pete. I love flowers and music and well..everything it would seem.

[Tom]

If music be the food of love....you've composed a memorable symphony here Jack !

Splendid indeed Sir !!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Tom. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving such kind words for me.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is like stepping into a comfortable slipper...warm, delicate and safe. When you do choose to rhyme, you do it so well; I'm never accousted by the feeling that your words are forced or overly wrought.

Beneath a sunrise of violin vistas
Precious this garden of song
Petals in piccolo choruses beaming
Hoping you will sing along -- for me this is the perfect description of spring/summer. The time of beginnings and briths. I love this stanza.

Beautifully written, my friend!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sarah. your kind words to me bring a sunny day smile to my face. Always i appreciate you.

[Frieda P]

What a vibrant poem Jack, it jumps off the page at you.

Beneath a sunrise of violin vistas
Precious this garden of song
Petals in piccolo choruses beaming
Hoping you will sing along

This one just makes my heart smile, sigh as usual my dear friend....

[Jack...]

If I can make your heart smile Dear frieda, then it is I who am sighing. Thank you always for shining your light in my world.

[Emerald Seas]

A sweet melody, Jack. Your appreciation for music, beauty, and all that is lovely flows from this perfectly toned piece. I enjoyed this very much!

[Jack...]

Thank you my dear friend. I can almost see these marigolds reflecting in your beautiful green eyes.

[Emerald Seas]

;) you're welcome!

[Rita L. Sev]

The gentle song of this piece sings to my heart in a special way, Jack - I love marigolds. Every spring, my husband plats them for me, so that I can look out the window in the morning and see the sunrise above and the sunny petals below... They are flowers of joy. Thank you for the smile!

[Jack...]

And thank you for the smile Rita. Happy you enjoyed this.

[Anand Sehgal]

Scented illusions of days in the past
And those about to begin

felt surreal trance :) lovely

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Pryde Foltz]

Splendid love poem, Jack. Loved the deep whimsy of it.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Pryde