This would make an excellent message on the inside of a valentines card !
A very romantic & tender poem !
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Tom. Really it was just a rhyming exercise for me, don't want to lose it. I have been writing.. read moreThanks Tom. Really it was just a rhyming exercise for me, don't want to lose it. I have been writing a lot of free verse lately and wanted to make sure I could still rhyme. :) Thanks again
This is cute. And you will love her in a car, you will love her near or far... Out of the realm of moonlight and roses and into the realm of every day...cleaning, cooking, shopping...the things a life together are actually made of. A man who can whisper sweet nothings while he's helping with the dishes...now, that man is a rare treasure.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I'll dry. :) Thanks so much my wonderful friend. I am happy you came by and enjoyed my poem.
Of all of this fun"
Wow. Jack. Now you are moving from the romance to the husdand and wife duties. Women like to put their men to work not counting shopping too with the credit card...lol...A splendid read and write
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Oh no, did I do that?????? I might have to rethink this one. :) Thanks so much Sami.
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..