I'll always love you

The title says it all

 

I’ll always love you

Yes it is true

When you are happy

When you are blue

When you are sleeping

When you are not

When it is winter

When it is hot

Out on a picnic

Sitting inside

Swinging on swings

Sliding on slides

If it is raining

If we are wet

I’ll always love you

That you can bet

If in a sailboat

Or in a car

For a short distance

Or very far

Up in an airplane

Out in the blue

Whatever it is

I’ll always love you

If we are singing

If we just talk

If we are running

Just taking a walk

If we are old

If we are new

If in the middle

I’ll always love you

If in a poem

If in a book

If we are cleaning

Preparing to cook

If in the pantry

Home from the store

If doing laundry

Scrubbing the floor

If we are shopping

If we are done

If we are tired

Of all of this fun

And if we don’t

Or if we do

Whatever it is

I’ll always love you

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Keith]

Splendid uplifting write, superb rhythm and flow.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Keith.

[Traci]

Now this is a wonderful testimony to unconditional love! Enjoyed the honesty and emotion behind each line, nicely done my friend.

[Jack...]

I always appreciate you stopping by and leaving such sweet words for me my dear friend. I wear a smile because of you this day.

[Traci]

Thank you for brightening my day with your smile and beautiful words. Always a pleasure to read your work, my friend.

[ANTO]

It genius that you call all the chores listed as fun - it all depends who you are doing them with as to how they can be fun or laborious. A tender testimony to love Jack.
Bravo

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Anto. I was just having a little fun with this one.

[Cassie]

I am glad to see these kinds of poems from you, not those one you were writing before that were filled with so much sadness.

[Jack...]

Cassie, Different days, different feelings. Thanks so much.

[prachi prangya agasti]

sweet and romantic... nice piece...!!

[Jack...]

Hi Prachi, nice to see you again. Thanks so much.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's so good to see that romance is alive and well!

...simply delightful, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kelly.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Very sweet piece, Jack. I like the the emotion in this one...you didn't go extremely deep, but rather took us on a more whimsical journey of the heart. It doesn't always have to be blood and guts, but sometimes a nice, light-hearted piece gives us the sense that it was rooted in honesty and thus the emotion really shines through. Good rhyme too.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

This has a great rhythm, like a Dr. Seuss love song! Sweet and charming, this has me smiling, Jack!

[Jack...]

So very happy it made you smile Rita.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Reminds me of Dr. Seuss, Jack, who was a favorite of mine and my son's. Really a lot of fun - I am smiling broadly.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Joyce.

[Frieda P]

Kind of reads like the Dr Seuss kind of love in its rhythm & rhyme...it rolls off the tongue so easily.....I like this new twist, delightful read Jack. I will love you on a boat or in a moat. ;-)

[Frieda P]

Maybe I've been hanging out with those little tykes for too long...

[Jack...]

As you tote a heavy coat and hold unto my remote. Thanks so much Frieda. Just letting my fingers do the talking for a bit. Rhyme practice.