Music of our Love

Music ~ love ~ us

Music of our Love

 

The music of our love

In two part harmony

Half sung by your heart

The other half by me

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Sweet and lovely sentiment in this one, Jack! This would definitely make a great Valemtine. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Lydi.

[Astro]

Great lines Jack, I can see this one printed on posters, PC wallpapers, Hallmark cards and skin.

[Jack...]

Thanks Astro.

[TL Boehm]

ah yes a sweet little ditty this is. Romantic and airy. Well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[s y e]

Music of our Love, wow this is so amazing, my friend. This write gave me an idea for a story, haha.
Your writes are always written from the heart.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Noodle. I appreciate your kind words.

[Cassie]

I like this, music of our love...loved it.

[Jack...]

The melody of brilliant sunshine is always welcome on my page. Thanks so much Cassie.

[Cassie]

That review made me smile, thank you my friend

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

You know...it doesn't take a bunch of lines or epic images, no long, drawn out metaphors that go on for stanzas and stanzas...sometimes all it takes is a pure heart and an expression in four beautiful lines. This was magical in its serenity and tenderness. Love the musical theme here; goes so well with the idea of love. Great work, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Sarah. Another Hallmark moment I guess found my mind again.

[Joyce S. Greene]

What a lovely poem, Jack. I can feel a song between its lines and it is a very loving song. Beautifully written and illustrated.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Joyce. Just a little something my fingers came up with.

[Emerald Seas]

Is this a tune I can pick up at the market? Because right now I think my tune is playing a little differently - haha...
Sleep cures everything right?? lol

[Jack...]

I can write you a lullaby if you like. :) Thanks so much my friend.

[Emerald Seas]

I'd love a lullaby :) you're so talented, anything you put together would be a blessed melody.
read moreI'd love a lullaby :) you're so talented, anything you put together would be a blessed melody.
I do love the poem - I guess I didn't manage to say that in my first comments. :)

[Jack...]

Give me a day or two and I will see what I can come up with.

[Emerald Seas]

Oh no, you don't have to do that, Jack. I would adore it, but I don't want you to feel obliged. Jeez, I'm so off lately... Did I sound like I was nudging for a song? Just ignore me. As I said sleep cures everything :)

[Jack...]

No my sweet friend, you did not sound like you were nudging me for a song. It was I who offered if you remember. Just let me see what I can do, if I can do it I will, if not, well then I won't.

[Emerald Seas]

;) thank you.

[Jack...]

I guess I should say, "let me sleep on it." :)

[kublakhan27]

How does that song go? Just an old-fashioned love song, coming out in three-part harmony, or something like that haha Obviously two parts are much more fun, and more meaningful...beautiful lines my friend.

[Jack...]

Yeah but three part might be kind of fun too. :) Thanks so much.

[kublakhan27]

Haha very true :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nothing better than that . To hear love and its song sung by both hearts...Splendid...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. Heart song, nothing better

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)