Colors of the day

Just a dream...

Colors of the day

 ~

I find the sun rises where my heart longs to be…

Beyond the horizon that lives just outside my window,

where cool mornings find a soft breeze playing in the yard

while fresh coffee, two cups, rest beneath a jasmine covered veranda,

as a hummingbird and butterfly share the same morning glory

and your hand melts into mine and we become one ~

in the colors of the day

~

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

Just beautiful, Jack! First your lovely graphic and then your even more lovely poem. I loved it! Words that are worth waking up early for.

[Jack...]

Joyce, I truly appreciate you visiting my poem. Your kind words make my morning bright.

[Rita L. Sev]

Breakfast with a hummingbird, a butterfly, and my love... sounds wonderful! Very pretty, Jack - I like that you are using some different forms.

[Jack...]

Thank you Rita for finding this and leaving such kind words for me. Good morning to you.

[SyberRose]

a lovely morning indeed, coffee,birds and the fragrance of jasmine...and a touch of romance too.
Nicely penned Jack as always...loved it:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Rose and good morning. :)

[kublakhan27]

Pure beauty...the jasmine made me think of incense, which is commonly lit in my place, usually in the vicinity of coffee and a blank notebook...this has a lovely, lilting feel about it...poetry can be nasty business at times (or maybe that's just me) but it's refreshing to come across these little gems now and again :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my new friend. I just realized, I don't have the 27 next to your name in the collab. I need to go fix that.

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure :) Oh that's alright on the name, no need to rush haha

[shallimarRose]

" coffee, two cups, rest beneath a jasmine covered veranda,
as a hummingbird and butterfly share the same morning glory
and your hand melts into mine"

Jack this sings to me of piece and serenity ...
My favorite thought here.. The hummingbird and the butterfly sharing the same morning glory...
The man and the woman sharing the glory of the morning..? Gorgeous poem.. but after all.. It Jack, right guys...

as always a lovely way to spend any part of the day. Reading your ink. xo Rose

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Just lost in a dream this morning.

[shallimarRose]

I am often lost in such dreams.. But then I guess that's why the romantic poetry comes so easily. Always a pleasure to read your page.. xo

[Frieda P]

A lovely whisper of an enchanted morning colored on your page Jack.

Jasmine covered veranda, I'm so there!

A sigh and a tip of the coffee to you my friend. ;-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Happiness finds me when you visit my poetry. Just lost in a dream this morning.

[Frieda P]

That was supposed to be 'coffee cup' I didn't spill any on your sweet poetry...always my pleasure Jack.

[Lily Mae]

Very beautiful..the soft gentle touch of nature and the embrace of two lovers.. very nice.. :)

[Jack...]

I always smile when I see you visit my poetry Lily Mae. Thank you so much for the smile this morning.

[Sami Khalil]

Two lovers in oneness with Nature in a soft breezy dream where feelings melt with the sunrise...Marvelous...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. Just a little dreaming this morning.

[Sami Khalil]

That is good...Have a great one...:)