Whispers in the distance

whispering love to distant ears.

 

 

 

Whispers in the distance

 

Whispers in the distance

A wavering sort of sound

Sifting through the twilight

When no one is around

 

Simple in distinction

Comforting and free

Touching every treetop branch

Sent to you from me

 

Neath a starlight shining

Sunset on the mist

True in its affection

Upon your ears now kissed

 

Finding of its journey

Hope to call my own

Standing here this evening

My heart is not alone

 

Careful words are chosen

Thoughts provide the way

My imagination

Never more to stray

 

Phrases in the moonlight

Spoken steady pace

Heaven hears my promises

Made tonight, this place

 

Hear, for I have spoken

A sentence bold and true

The whispers in the distance

Say that I love you

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

I really enjoyed this one. Also, I like how you used a different font here :) Every poet has that whisper calling to them to write...

[Jack...]

Indeed they do. Thanks so much my friend.

[Astro]

Whether it is for the lost or, the new discovery this is eloquently penned and beautiful in its sentiment. Well done again friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks Astro, I gotta throw a love poem out there every once in a while.

[Astro]

If you stopped, there'd be more broken hearts than you think.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah. You rule the WC when you write romantic

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Your words are very bewitching today Jack! They keep me knocking at your chambers ...as the door opens they run down the corridors with bright flags shaped like yellow butterflies signaling my need for warmth. Even here beneath the dark sky I'm surrounded by warmth and tranquility.... your moon so tender with passions.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much again my friend, for your visits to my world. I am happy you found this one wandering down the hallway to your needs. It is my pleasure to bring to you this warmth that you so desire via my words. I appreciate you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Charismatic rhyme in this beautifully written love poem. Have to say, though, imagination can still roam....remember, you can look at the menu in a restaurant as long as you eat your meals at home! :) Gorgeous imagery here, Jack. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lydi. Always I appreciate your visits.

[ANTO]

"Standing here this evening
My heart is not alone"

It is a great feeling Jack is it not..?
This poem relates personally and I'm very glad and honoured to read it Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Lily Finch]

Hear, for I have spoken
A sentence bold and true
The whispers in the distancee
Say that I love you..............and I love these lines
lovely write..

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lily

[Joyce S. Greene]

A glorious poem, Jack! A small masterpiece, indeed, and I loved it. You write rhymed, metered voice seemingly without effort (and I know it takes a lot of work) and your lines flow so smoothly. A true pleasure to read your poetry.

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much Joyce for your kind words to me.

[TL Boehm]

Phrases in the moonlight
Spoken steady pace
Heaven hears my promises
Made tonight, this place

such an elegant gentle write - the steadiness of love. Bilssful.

[Jack...]

Thank you again my sweet friend.

[TL Boehm]

of course. such consistency in your work, Jack. I admire that ability to write at a specific level - a high level - you never just toss something up on the page - I know I do but your work is always polished - finely tuned.

[LadySoDivine]

Very beautiful poem, Jack. I believe the first stanza is my favorite. It just rings a melody through my ears as I read it. Wonderful job, my friend. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I always smile when you visit.