I've sent a finch

More bird themed poetry.

 

I’ve sent a finch

 

 

I’ve sent a finch for you to see,

it carries so much love from me

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Right outside of your front door,

to let you know I love you more

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If seated on your window sill,

your heart my love is sent to fill

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If you see it high above,

it circles you with all my love

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If it perches in a tree,

my love for you will always be

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If this little bird does sing,

a sonnet of my love it brings

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For every word it sings is true,

he keeps repeating, I love you

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And if this bird does fly away

fear not, my love shall never stray 

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I've sent a finch for you to see

it carries so much love from me

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[s y e]

A birdy, so cute! This is a lovely sweet poem Jack, loved your rhyming scheme.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Noodle

[Frieda P]

Sami stole my zephyr line....very sweet Jack, great rhyming scheme, and a delicate love poem.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Just a little something to while away the afternoon.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A song bird sent to serenade in a sweet poem full of love Jack. The delicate structure and tones of the poem are in keeping with the finch.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much John.

[Sami Khalil]

Send love and passion Jack on any type of bird life and any kind of zephyr's songs. A splendid one...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks Sami. This one just flew into my mind...I assume that's why they call me a bird brain.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Creative,...You are welcome...:)

[zainul]

I love your sweet finch and your lovely gesture
I am glad to read your poem with so nice texture

[Jack...]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Jack.
Last morning I saw a yellow bird flying happily from tree to tree.
Your poem reminded me of that lovely bird.

[icelandicblue]

A sweet little bird for a sweet little poem. The birds are flying south, they're coming your way!

[Jack...]

Thanks Anne. Just having a little avian fun.