Shelley Senryu

This ones for you Shelley...all in fun mind you

 

alliteration

assonance and consonance

Shelley has been here

 

:)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Angel]

She is our own Professor Emeritus of Poetry! I've learned more than I ever thought there was to learn about poetry, from her wonderful reviews.
And her poetry! Whew!! I'll never write like that!

[Jack...]

Thank you dear Angel

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Another great one Jack for a great poet...Awesome...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

I have learned a lot about poetry just by reading Shelley's reviews! Another apt representation in senryu!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. Indeed, her words worked well in this.

[SyberRose]

I always love to see Shelley visit... and i like the name Shelley Senryu...nicely done Jack:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rose. Just tyring to produce some smiles on this Friday.

[ShelleyA]

I love this Jack... it's so true. Some of the important elements of poetry that jump out at me when I'm reading poetry. A clever write. I Love the presentation. As always, this is excellent use of brevity and a well crafted Senryu. Good depth of feeling; very nice aha moment. Good word choice; this would not be me without mentioning "nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Hope it made you smile my friend. I always appreciate you.

[ShelleyA]

Yes it did, Jack. I love it and thanks so much! Have a great day!

[Zahra]

cool, another really nice one jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks Zahra so much