Noodle Senryu

This ones for you Noodle

 

 

Some like their elbows

and others macaroni

We love our Noodle

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[B-poet]

A great senryu for Noodlehead. Nice work. A fine write & read. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I appreciate you stopping by. She is a great girl.

[MandaBear]

Lol very cute =) We do love our noodle!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much.

[Ravyne Hawke]

So adorable! indeed I prefer the Noodle!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Lori.

[Stella Armour]

certainly do......she is a sweetheart

[Jack...]

Thank you Stella

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed we do! :) And now I want macaroni... :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rita. I'll take manicotti

[Relic]

haha, I agree. For someone so young, she is boiling over with talent. :)

[Jack...]

And a little saucy at times too. :) Thanks so much.

[Relic]

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[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure................................

[Jack...]

Thank you sir.

[SyberRose]

yes we love our Noodle....a gem she is and you did a great job with this Jack...Rose

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rose.

[Keith]

Oh yeah!........................................

[Jack...]

Thanks Keith

[Mark]

Ha very nice. I heard an NPR show this morning. A japanese Haiku expert was telling the host that westerners have gotten it wrong about Haiku. Its not about syllable count she said but about creating a small snapshot of life.

[Jack...]

And she was correct. I have studied the forms and know this, just having a little fun. Thanks so much my friend.