Noodle Senryu

Noodle Senryu

A Poem by Jack...
"

This ones for you Noodle

"

 

 

Some like their elbows

and others macaroni

We love our Noodle

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Yes, Jack, you used your bardic noddle
- this feisty girl`s no labradoodle,
more a purebred rhyming poodle
oodling odes curled into noodles!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Wow Pete, that's oodles of oodles. Thanks so much
Ha Jack everything has been said so I must be the only person on the planet who does not get the first line lol?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Macaroni is also called elbow noodles or elbows. Thanks John.
Gee, I feel like I'm the only one without a poem that's a tribute to Noodle.

But yours is certainly one of my favorites. Light and witty, a perfect homage to one of my favorite WC writers. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Will.
Fantastic one. Really fun to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde
Made me smile!! :)
Noodle is Fantastic!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Kooky and makes you smile, like Noodles humor.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Astro
Yes, we do!!
Some like Noodle Soup, some like Noodles'n'Cheese...
We love our Noodlehead!!!
Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Angel
You choose your words so carefully, have made this form into a very personal art, then, shared it so willingly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like Noodle too. Thank you for the positive and fun poem to read.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
some prefer Noodles
and others feel differently
but THEY don't know her

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

You are correct my friend.

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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