A.M.S. (Red) Senryu

This ones for you Red

cool is colored blue

warm can be felt in ochre

Red is always hot!

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[SteveB]

LOL You are on a roll. Well done again Jack

[Jack...]

Thanks Steve. I appreciate it.

[icelandicblue]

She is muy caliente! I can't say ella esta because well...that would just change the whole thing. She is fantastico, yes?

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Anne

[Frieda P]

Red hot, ha, she's heat personified when she releases a kraken! Also an awesome friend...

[Jack...]

Thank you Frieda. She is an awesome friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Yes, that's perfect!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[s y e]

This is a lovely write to Red, I can tell she loved it, ha.

[Jack...]

It sure seems that way...thanks Sye.

[redflutterby]

Whoohoo....now that's me!! Hot stuff coming through... Thanks Jack. This really blew my skirt up...oooppssss!! Ha....

[Jack...]

Excited it made you smile my friend.

[redflutterby]

Yes it did my friend.... ;-)). Thank you...

[one sky]

Nice senryu dedicated to a friend. Red is totally hot.
This is cool, Jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Zahra]

Another amazing senryu, both cool & hot :) good job

[Jack...]

Thanks Zahra