Baby Ricochet Senryu

This ones for you BR

 

 

 

Who you looking at

You stupid @#!!//?&xx!%!ole

Dumb @?&^%#%%er

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Dye]

This made me laugh so much. I love how you have captured the personalities of the member's here.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Dye. I wrote a bunch of these one day, just having fun.

[Frieda P]

How @#!!//?&xx!%! perfect! That's our Baby....

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda

[smilempsn]

Oopssie.. I wonder what comment will BR make on this one ;)
you @#$#@$#$# :P

[Jack...]

One never knows. Thanks so much

[smilempsn]

I read it after reviewing.. that he already commented on this one :P

[Relic]

hahahahhahahahaha Good one.

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend.

[Marie]

Yep. That's Baby Richochet at his best...

[Jack...]

Thanks Marie, you need to check out yours.

[Baby Ricochet]

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!! Too funny. Thank you

[Jack...]

Happy it made you laugh my friend. Thanks so much.

[Zahra]

hahahah very funny, and should i say great choice of words. :D well placed. He'll enjoy this

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Zahra. I hope you feel better soon.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Is it wrong that I had no trouble interpreting this? :) Funny - you have been busy today, and I am enjoying the fruits of your labor!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rita, It was hard to get the syllable count just right, but I think I got it.

[ShelleyA]

Wow! Jack, this is definitely expletive. Excellent use of brevity. Powerful. Goes well with the image. Good flow and tone. Deep expression of emotion - anger and rage, expressed so vividly with so few words... I'm speechless! Well penned and a good read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Thanks Shelley, just trying to spice up a boring Thursday afternoon.

[ShelleyA]

You're definitely spicing it up Jack. Have fun and have a good night!

[s y e]

This made me laugh, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks Noodle