Frieda Haiku

This ones for your Frieda Well it is nature

Hey Mother Nature

Butterflies that flutter by

Bring them to me now!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Very sweet Jack, I love it, had to go searching for this, was tucked away on page 3, seems you've done a Senryu for everyone!

[Jack...]

You are welcome my friend, I went on a senryu/haiku frenzy.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a good obsession. :-)

[Jack...]

Especially when the subjects are wonderful people

[shallimarRose]

what happened to the Senryu? lol Arent you tired yet? hehe

[emmajoy]

Special words for a special friend and - so appropriate.

[Jack...]

You are so correct my friend.

[emmajoy]

I know only too well

[Sami Khalil]

An awesome write for an awesome poet and lady...splendid...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Baby Ricochet]

That's out Frieda. We love her

[Jack...]

Thank you sir.

[Zahra]

Awww this is lovely. Nice use of her fluttering by butterflies.

[Jack...]

Thank you Zahra

[Rita L. Sev]

Perfect haiku for Frieda!

[Jack...]

Thanks Rita.

[s y e]

That's for the lovely lady, she'll love it.

[Jack...]

Thanks Noodle, I hope so.

[s y e]

You know she will.

[ShelleyA]

Hi Jack. This is a charming write, perfect for Frieda. Good presentation. A skillfully crafted Haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Good imagery, flow and tone. Good depth of feeling. She will love this. Good word choice. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Shelley.

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome. Have a good night!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Frieda may play the touch cat but she has a heart as graceful as a butterfly.

[Jack...]

Indeed sir, now I know you are right. Thanks so much