Angi Senryu
A Poem by
Jack...
Angi, this one's for you
She always said no
That is when I realized
I’m no Hugh Jackman
© 2013 Jack...
Author's Note
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Reviews
Funny, I might have to fight Angi for this one....two Jacks in one poem, can't go wrong with that.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank so my my friend.
Hahah, nice one Jack! I'm not versed enough in Senryu to critique, but I know what I like.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hahah, nice one Jack! I'm not versed enough in Senryu to critique, but I know what I like.
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Astro.
11 Years Ago
No prob, buddy!
Thers a couple of Angis here better be careful ...
I dont know where it came from but this was cute..
lol xo Rose
Posted 11 Years Ago
Thers a couple of Angis here better be careful ...
I dont know where it came from but this was cute..
lol xo Rose
11 Years Ago
This Angi knows who she is. Thanks Rose.
nice seryu for angi... Enjoying your senryus a lot
Posted 11 Years Ago
nice seryu for angi... Enjoying your senryus a lot
11 Years Ago
Thanks Zahra
hahahahahahhahahhahahahahah
Posted 11 Years Ago
hahahahahahhahahhahahahahah
11 Years Ago
Thanks Pryde
HA! This is great - but do not despair - remember, Hugh Jackman is no Poet Jack... :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
HA! This is great - but do not despair - remember, Hugh Jackman is no Poet Jack... :)
11 Years Ago
I keep telling myself that. Thanks Rita
Hugh Jackman *sigh*
ooooooohhhhhhhh....
What an absolutely beeee you teee fulll man.....
*sigh*
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hugh Jackman *sigh*
ooooooohhhhhhhh....
What an absolutely beeee you teee fulll man.....
*sigh*
Hahaha! Oh the day we realize that we are not the hotness we thought we were! Haha! This is a funny senryu and there's so much honesty in it. Great write!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hahaha! Oh the day we realize that we are not the hotness we thought we were! Haha! This is a funny senryu and there's so much honesty in it. Great write!
11 Years Ago
Thank you Karen.
Ha! There is no one like Hugh Jackman.. sorry Jack! That man curls my toes... *sighs* oh and this is a great senryu for Angi =D
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ha! There is no one like Hugh Jackman.. sorry Jack! That man curls my toes... *sighs* oh and this is a great senryu for Angi =D
11 Years Ago
Thanks Lori.
A delightful write, Jack. Creative with excellent use of brevity and humor. A skillfully crafted traditional Senryu. Good flow and tone. I'm sure Angi will love it. Good depth of feeling. I love the aha moment in line three. Good word choice. Well penned and most enjoyable read. Write on!
Posted 11 Years Ago
A delightful write, Jack. Creative with excellent use of brevity and humor. A skillfully crafted traditional Senryu. Good flow and tone. I'm sure Angi will love it. Good depth of feeling. I love the aha moment in line three. Good word choice. Well penned and most enjoyable read. Write on!
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Shelley.
11 Years Ago
You're very welcome and my pleasure. Have a good night!
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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all ..
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