Love Boat Senryu

Would you drop anchor with me?

 

 

 

 

If hearts were a ship

On an endless sea of love

Would you sail with me?

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Ahhh clever! I like this one :D

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[Mark]

Nice poem, I would have pluralized ship though.

[Jack...]

Thanks Mark. I actually thought about that, but I felt it would change the entire meaning of the piece.

[TL Boehm]

Aw. that's Hallmark Card worthy. Anyone would love that!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Tammy. Glad you liked it.

[prachi prangya agasti]

love to... nice work..... :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Vikrantsingh]

I would love to :)
Jack simple and way better.. Work :)
You master in showcasing simple words with best way :) Cheers!
I love reading more and more from you now :)
- Singh :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. I am humbled by your words.

[Angi]

'Love! Exciting and new. Come aboard! We're expecting you. Love! Life's sweetest reward. Let it flow! It floats back to you. The Love Boat! Soon we'll be making another run. The Love Boat! Promises something for everyone. Set a course for adventure, your mind on a new romance. Love, won't hurt anymore. It's an open smile, on a friendly shore! It's looove! Welcome aboard! It's loooove!'

Is it sad that I know those lyrics by heart? Ha! Lovely little senryu, Jack! Angi~

[Jack...]

What's sad is I had that song stuck in my head most of the day yesterday after I wrote this and now it is back again. :) Thanks so much Angi.

[Angi]

Ha! Well, take comfort in knowing many people are singing with you!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

So sweet...seriously, Jack! You are a true romantic at heart, aren't you? This is something that I would just love to find tucked under my door, or in the pages of my notebook or even my pocketbook. Such lovely words with such feeling.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sarah. Feel free to print it out and place it in your purse anytime.

[SteveB]

Bloody well done sir!

But based upon the title I was hoping for Bery Convey and Charo making an appearance.

[Jack...]

Bert Convey, now there is a name I haven't heard in some time. Sounds like a good riddle for the radio show. Thanks so much Steve.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Aww.. so sweet and romantic.. love this, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lori.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah. Beautiful Senryu Jack...............

[Jack...]

Thank you sir.