Dead Alarm Clock Senryu

Can't you see I'm sleeping?

 

 

 

 

Lost within a dream

where she holds me in her arms

KILL THE ALARM CLOCK!!!!

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

AWESOME, Jack!! Oh, you write some of the best (and funniest) senryus I've read thus far. Come to think of it, I haven't written any humorous ones yet. That would be something fun to try!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[TL Boehm]

I concur! I don't have an alarm clock though. I have a stupid cat.

[Jack...]

I know what you mean. That's purrfect. Thanks Tammy.

[Eric Pudalov]

TL...that happens to me all the time! My cats wake me up at 5 am tapping on my face.

[Marie]

Sometimes alarm clocks deserve to die...

[Jack...]

Thanks Marie, you are so right.

[Melanie Genevieve]

hahahahaha this made me laugh. It's awful when a great dream is ruined by the new day. Freakin alarm clocks reminding us we have a real world to tend to and work to do. maow

[Jack...]

I know, why can't we all just live in a dream? Thanks so very much.

[Traci]

I think we've all been here before, and unfortunately very seldom can we fall back asleep and pick up where we left off. Another well penned write, thank you for sharing your thoughts, your humor, and wonderful words this morning.

[Jack...]

Traci, thank you so much for bringing a smile to my face this morning. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving such sweet words for me.

[Traci]

Always a pleasure, Jack. Have a great day, my friend.

[Holly Mason]

hey slacker....wake- up!!!
alarms come in so many sounds...Daddy ,Daddy get up
bark,bark,bark
ring , ring, ring, "Are you up yet it is 4 a.m.? I raised you to be an early riser" -dang moms
funny funny funny
thank you for the early morning word smile...fine sleepin' in sir*)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Holly.

[Baby Ricochet]

all alarms must die................

[Jack...]

Shout it loud my friend. Thanks so much sir.

[Emerald Seas]

Lol - love it! I've had that thought - shooting the alarm that is.... not the dream about her! Haha

[Jack...]

Hey there stranger. Thanks so much.

[Emerald Seas]

:) on the BWI to NYC - will pop in again in a day or two

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Oh, I've so been here before, my friend! Sometimes, when I wake from a particularly good dream, if I am quick enough, I can go back to sleep and pick things up where I left off, but usually it is just a wisp of a lost enchantment. *sigh* Well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sarah

[redflutterby]

Awww....did that alarm clock interrupt our potato salad picnic?? Lol...;-pp

[Jack...]

Yes it did...I wasn't finished eating yet. :) Thanks Red.