Smile Noodle, smile

Smile Noodle, smile

A Poem by Jack...
"

Smile my friend

"

 

 

 

Smile Noodle, smile

 

Smile Noodle, smile

things will be ok

you will see tomorrow

comes a brand new day

 

The sun will start by shining

the air will feel so clean

trees will wave good morning

just like in a dream

 

Posies will be blooming

beautiful you'll see

serving up some nectar

to a bumblebee

 

Blue birds will be singing

in harmonizing style

butterflies will call your name

smile Noodle, smile

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
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Lovely caring and flowing little 'ditty' for Noodles. Third stanza first line a word is missing? Will be?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks John, I wrote it quickly, must've missed that one.
Maybe I should smile now

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

That would be nice sir.
Sweet, simple, and bright. Did not expect this kind of writing after I saw your profile picture. I thought you'd be more into symbolisms, satires, sarcasm, dark. I guess you can't really judge a book by its dust cover.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

open that book my friend, you just might be surprised at what you find.
Noodle had a bad day? Great poem Jack... I feel like smiling!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Mark
So sweet Jack, you're a gem to write such a lovely poem for our prized noodlebumble! Smile Sye, smile....you heard the man!! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Frieda. I hate seeing someone sad
Wow Jack - I am so touched, this is a lovely piece. It really made me smile and brighten my day, thank you so much, Jackomantic. You're an amazing friend anyone could have. (:

~ New Doll Girl

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Hope it made you smile my friend.
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s y e

11 Years Ago

It certainly did.
Smile and the whole world will smile with you , weep and your friends will weep with you. A caring man and father figure wrote this lovely cheering piece...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Just trying to induce a smile Sami. Thanks so much
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Good. You are welcome...:)

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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