Smile Noodle, smile

Smile Noodle, smile

A Poem by Jack...
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Smile my friend

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Smile Noodle, smile

 

Smile Noodle, smile

things will be ok

you will see tomorrow

comes a brand new day

 

The sun will start by shining

the air will feel so clean

trees will wave good morning

just like in a dream

 

Posies will be blooming

beautiful you'll see

serving up some nectar

to a bumblebee

 

Blue birds will be singing

in harmonizing style

butterflies will call your name

smile Noodle, smile

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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this should do the trick..If not I'll force feed her some limericks

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

That might help. Thanks so much Doc.
Great way to say chin up, and it won't always be this way to a friend who is down. Well done Jack, and very true. You have to take the good with the bad, but just when you thought it couldn't be worse fate puts you on a different course where life is again sweet like nectar to a bumblebee.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend. Just trying to bring happy where it wasn't.
Astro

11 Years Ago

I'd do the same thing. :D
Awww, I know our Noodly~girl loves this! Sweet ode to a sweet girlie. Nicely done, Jack. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Angi...just a little sunshine on a cloudy day.
Our Noodledoodle is a very lucky young lady, to have you for a friend, Jack.
And so am I.
I do hope this adorable little poem made our baby smile...
I know it's got me grinning from ear to ear...in fact, I think I may have chuckled once or twice while reading it. Not quite a giggle...definitely not a guffaw...just a happy little chuckle.
Your love shows in this poem...and it is a very sweet, happy kind of love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Angel. I am so happy it made you smile and chuckle...I appreciate your friendship and.. read more
Well, it made me smile! (and I know that's not usually hard to do, but today is a rough day - my Dad's birthday...) Sunshine and cheer, just what is needed - I certainly hope Noodle smiled! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rita, I believe she did and I am happy to know you did as well.
This is adorable!!! I definatly needed a smile today! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Well Maggie, I am happy I could bring that smile to you. Thanks so much, your kind words have brough.. read more
❤ Maggie ❤

11 Years Ago

Aw thank you :) I'm so glad!
I love this upbeat poem. It brought a smile to my face too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anne, your smile makes me happy.
That's a really nice little poem for a really nice little lady. Top work Jack

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Keith. She was having a down day so I figured I'd try and get her to smile.
Keith

11 Years Ago

Jack, you were just the man for the Job. As far as I am concerned she is the best thing to come ou.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

You guys are way to kind! (:
lovely write for a sweet girl
serving up some nectar to a bumblebee....adorable
I am sure she smiled after this...written with care*)
thank you for giving a lift to a sweet girl fine sir...truly


Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Holly. Just trying to spread a little cheer.
Thank you, a nice poem to wake up to when you feel weighed down

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Cassie

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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