Deep in my heart

 

Deep within my heart

 

 

Oh so weak, I lift you by delicate wings,

gently as to not smear the wonder

that does meet my eyes

 

Softly you rest in my hand,

exploring my skin,

the lines of my life, crooked and scarred

 

Tiny feet dance

tickling me with wonderful sonnets,

penned by nature herself

 

As if you can see

my intentions are pure,

for I long to bring you joy, which you bring me

 

A sweet fragrance on the wind

rhymes perfectly with your mesmerizing luminescent colors,

shimmering in the morning sun

 

Spread your wings my little friend

for I have planted you a garden

filled with the nectar which you desire

 

And I will sit and watch

silently as you float, happy and free

amongst the beauty that grows for only you

 

Deep within my heart

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

"Softly you rest in my hand,
exploring the lines of my life
ticketing me with sonnets..
I always love your writing sweet Jack..

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend. You make me smile always

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Dang there it Freida's butterfly again. Where is that damned raven when you need him? This is a very gentle poem with a feeling of sitting in the morning sun just watching nature.

[Jack...]

I had the raven in a cage, didn't want him spoiling the moment. Thanks John

[Cassie]

At last a poem from Jack that is not sad. Very nicely done

[Jack...]

Indeed Cassie, I can smile every once in a while. :) Thanks so much.

[Sami Khalil]

"Spread your wings my little friend
for I have planted you a garden
filled with the nectar which you desire

And I will sit and watch
silently as you float, happy and free"
The promises of love at its best from a romantic poet . She is indeed a butterfly with fragility...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A clear defines piece that reads very well, well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Thomas

[Mark]

Lovely thoughts, full of light and promise. Very nice.

[Jack...]

Thanks Mark, I appreciate your kind review.

[s y e]

Wow, you made me cry again, this is such an emotional, touching write, my friend. Written with so much passion and honestly blew me away. What a spectacular write.

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

I can't respond to this properly since there are tears exploding from my eyes, just takes my breath away Jack. Such a splendid write full of grace that enchants all my senses, I love this to pieces!! Thank you my sweet friend. x

[Jack...]

I write what I feel so that you can feel what I write. Thanks so much my sweet friend.