And I~for you

Just having some fun

 

And I ~ for you

 

And I ~ cling to a fortress

of endless temptation

with rings made of gold

and a tree built of life

 

Faltering corners

in new found dimensions

a little left over

but so very nice

 

Clinging to them

 

And I ~ search in a fountain

with quarters for feelings

so far neath the waters

my song sings alone

 

On sea shells and posters

of rock concert heroes

with hair like a Sheppard

to call the sheep home

 

Calling to all

 

And I ~ call to the mountains

in echoes of sailors

with waves in the morning

and snowcaps at night

 

Floating horizons

alone on the wishes

that winds will prevail

and make everything right

 

Sailing again

 

And I ~ lean on a valley

of tree lines and saucers

with cups filled with coffee

to taste when it’s due

 

With smiles forever

and words down on paper

with love as my meaning

I write them ~ for you

 

Please hear my call

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I have to echo Angel's words here, you're making us gals sigh crazy with your romantic poetry....I'm about to hyperventilate if I sigh again!! ;-)

[Jack...]

Always Frieda, I am honored by your kind words and you presence on my page.

[Angi]

Steve is gonna be so mad that you have written me another love poem, Jack. You are gonna have to stop this. It can never be. ;P Angi~

[Jack...]

Damn, I guess I have to go back to the sad and heart broken pieces. Thanks Angi.

[ShelleyA]

Hi Jack. A lovely write in call and response. Heartfelt and introspective. Elegant verse. Lovely presentation. Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Each vignette paints a lovely picture that any reader can appreciate. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm and use of enjambment. Nice use of simile. Lovely depth of feeling. A beautiful way of expressing love through nature's imagery. Very good closing lines. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Shelley.

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Jack. Have a wonderful day!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I hear you Jack and am so flattered!!!!
only kidding. As always eloquence in 'ink'

[Jack...]

Thanks John and you're welcome...")

[Ayvid N]

You take love and you take the beauty of nature and weave them into unforgettable romance. Wow! I am so very inspired by this write Jack. Thanks for sharing this write on fond hopes and love.

[Jack...]

Divya, your visits always make me smile. Thank you

[Ayvid N]

You are most welcome Jack. Your poems are such an inspiration!

[prachi prangya agasti]

beautifully written... excellent piece..!!

[Jack...]

Thank you Prachi

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful as always Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks BR, I appreciate it

[Kenneth Compton]

wonderful meter and flow. Did not stumble even once, congratulations on a job well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Kenneth

[Mark]

Another great romantic piece. I feel a bit of longing and perhaps disappointment in this one.

[Jack...]

I think both are always floating around somewhere Mark. Thanks so much,

[SyberRose]

Wow...I'm running out of words Jack to describe your beautiful poetry...Simply Marvelous...
You certainly have a wonderful muse...Loved it...Rose

[Jack...]

Rose, I always appreciate your sweet words. Thank you so much for being my friend.