I dream...

I dream of you

 

 

I dream...

 

 

I dream...

landscapes of wonder, rolling hills,

shade trees a plenty, clear waters

fill my mind with beauty

 

I dream...

fountains flow fluidly of love,

butterflies live forever as

gardens bloom in the moon light

 

I dream...

happiness floats on kite tails

of gingham and plaid

blending in with the soft morning breeze

 

I dream...

soft sand drinks the sea

melodically finding its way to shore

in everlasting tranquility

 

I dream...

rainbows play in the heavens,

children sing and dance

to the music of life

 

I dream...

for in these dreams I see hope

calling out to me

in the form of your love

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Mark]

Good dreams and it is good to dream them. First step toward changing one's reality

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Mark.

[Emerald Seas]

If I dreamed like this, I wouldn't wake! I love the imagery you unfold with each line. It is a soft, slumbering waltz of the imagination through a beautiful place. Well done!

[Jack...]

Wow, my dream reviews my dream. :) Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[Emerald Seas]

Lol, I'm your dream!? Not going to ask you to explain that one ;-)
You're welcome, my friend! Enjoy your weekend.

[TL Boehm]

gosh. iF I dreamed like that I would never want to wake up. I usually dream about stupid stuff. This poem is lovely, Jack
happiness floats on kite tails
of gingham and plaid
blending in with the soft morning breeze

I dream...
soft sand drinks the sea
melodically finding its way to shore
in everlasting tranquility

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. You always make me smile.

[s y e]

This is such a lovely, loving dream, Jack - It's perfect, no conflict or anything. When we love someone we seem to dream about them, make up this little life about being with them in every way possible. Growing old and all. It's lovely, Jackomantic.

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend. I hope all of your dreams are as beautiful as you are.

[s y e]

I have more nightmares than dreams, ha but when I do dream I wish I'd never wake up, lol. I'm pretending to be Cinderella. :P

[Marie]

You have such beautiful dreams...and, beautifully, you translate them to poetry...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marie.

[Emily B]

i want to wander in your dreams

mine are just too chaotic, i wake up tired every day

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Emily. Come on, climb aboard, there's plenty of room on that swan above.

[David Scott]

Jack, you put MLK to shame with your dream. No conflict here. No hidden agenda. No passive aggressive cutting under the cover of hidden purpose.
Then to give your dream the label of love for another; specific and individual love, you frame the thought in a setting of altruism.
Well done.

[Jack...]

David, thank you so much. I suppose we all see things differently, I myself have been told I live in a dream world...and I never argue with that. I appreciate your always fantastic reviews.

[David Scott]

Then never wake up! Your world is a lovely place to visit through your poetry.

[Pryde Foltz]

The hope is in the love. Great structure on this one and as always lovely words,

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. With love in your dreams, sleep is always so magical.

[Pryde Foltz]

Indeed. I hope everyone dreams like you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

This has such an ethereal feel to it, like a leaf cacading down from a tree. Your words reveal a warm heart, Jack...and a happy man!

[Jack...]

Kelly, I truly appreciate you visiting and leaving such kind words for me. Many heart felt thank yous I am sending your way.

[Kelly Scheppers]

My pleasure, Jack!

[AYVID N]

When we love someone, we see them everywhere and dream of them in every element of beautiful nature. I read a lot of passion, beauty and hope in all the lines. Wonderful read for someone in love. Thanks for sharing.

[Jack...]

Divya, my friend, so nice to see you here. Thank you always for your friendship and kind words.