If I dreamed like this, I wouldn't wake! I love the imagery you unfold with each line. It is a soft, slumbering waltz of the imagination through a beautiful place. Well done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Wow, my dream reviews my dream. :) Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
11 Years Ago
Lol, I'm your dream!? Not going to ask you to explain that one ;-)
You're welcome, my friend!.. read moreLol, I'm your dream!? Not going to ask you to explain that one ;-)
You're welcome, my friend! Enjoy your weekend.
gosh. iF I dreamed like that I would never want to wake up. I usually dream about stupid stuff. This poem is lovely, Jack
happiness floats on kite tails
of gingham and plaid
blending in with the soft morning breeze
I dream...
soft sand drinks the sea
melodically finding its way to shore
in everlasting tranquility
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much my friend. You always make me smile.
This is such a lovely, loving dream, Jack - It's perfect, no conflict or anything. When we love someone we seem to dream about them, make up this little life about being with them in every way possible. Growing old and all. It's lovely, Jackomantic.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend. I hope all of your dreams are as beautiful as you are.
11 Years Ago
I have more nightmares than dreams, ha but when I do dream I wish I'd never wake up, lol. I'm preten.. read moreI have more nightmares than dreams, ha but when I do dream I wish I'd never wake up, lol. I'm pretending to be Cinderella. :P
Jack, you put MLK to shame with your dream. No conflict here. No hidden agenda. No passive aggressive cutting under the cover of hidden purpose.
Then to give your dream the label of love for another; specific and individual love, you frame the thought in a setting of altruism.
Well done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
David, thank you so much. I suppose we all see things differently, I myself have been told I live in.. read moreDavid, thank you so much. I suppose we all see things differently, I myself have been told I live in a dream world...and I never argue with that. I appreciate your always fantastic reviews.
11 Years Ago
Then never wake up! Your world is a lovely place to visit through your poetry.
This has such an ethereal feel to it, like a leaf cacading down from a tree. Your words reveal a warm heart, Jack...and a happy man!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Kelly, I truly appreciate you visiting and leaving such kind words for me. Many heart felt thank you.. read moreKelly, I truly appreciate you visiting and leaving such kind words for me. Many heart felt thank yous I am sending your way.
When we love someone, we see them everywhere and dream of them in every element of beautiful nature. I read a lot of passion, beauty and hope in all the lines. Wonderful read for someone in love. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Divya, my friend, so nice to see you here. Thank you always for your friendship and kind words.
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..